HI!

oh wow that was good! i liked it wen he rans 2 the airport and then sees the pic and the lady tells him,oooh i cant wait wen he goes after her! cant wiat 2 read ur next part!

Ruqs

  kiran50274 <kiran50274@...> wrote:

"SAMEER, SAMEER, SAMEER!!!!!" rohit was waving his hands as he was
running towards him. Sameer had been sitting on a bench next to the
beach writing in his journal. "SAMEER!!!" yelled Rohit.
"Okay your near me and u have caught my attention so u don't have to
scream anymore," said Sameer.
"Oh sorry," said Rohit out of breath.
"Whats wrong?" asked Sameer.
"SAPNA…..LEAVING….AMERICA…..FLIGHT 164.….TODAY!!!!!" said Rohit not
knowing what was coming out of his mouth. But Sameer understood It
perfectly.
"What time?" he asked.
"4 o' clock,"
Sameer looked at his watch. It was 3:30 already. Sameer made a run
for it, but then stopped, turned around and came back. "Wait, if
she's leaving and didn't tell me then that must mean she doesn't want
to see me, so why should I stop her then?" asked Sameer.
"kiyonki tum us se pyar karte ho, (because u love her)" said Rohit.
"liken wo mujhe to pyar nahin karti (but she doesn't love me)" said
Sameer.
"kya yeh us ne tum se kaha? (did she say that to u?) asked Rohit.
Sameer shook his head and then realizing something he looked at Rohit
and smiled. He smiled back at him. "Thanks man!" said Sameer and
started running again.

(I want the music of kkhh to play as he is running to the airport. U
know the music that is played in the rain when srk runs to kajol to
tell her he is going to tell tina I love u )

He runs with a broad grin on his face. His grin making the dimples on
his cheek look deeper. He bumps into a car but jumps off the other
side. He saw a motorcycle in front of a store and sat on it. He
started driving it making a person in the back yell, "my bike!! My
bike!!"

AT THE AIRPORT
Sapna was wearing a green kamis that came above her knees and the
kamees had brown embroidery on it. She was wearing a brown pajama
like salwar with it. She was sitting on the bench stunned. She didn't
remember where she was, all she could see was Sameer's face. She had
not wanted to go to America alone. For one, aunt amrita (kajol's mean
aunt from kuch khati kuch mehti) always acted as if she was all rich,
when it was her dad who had given them their house. For another,
Sapna had a feeling that her aunt had something towards her dad. She
always acted all sweet and lady-like in front of him. When her age
was over a 100 years old, at least that's what Sapna thought.
But she had come because her dad had promised he would come as soon
as his work in India was over. And also because she had been dying to
meet aunty nargis (kajol`s mom from kuch khati kuch methi). Aunt
nargis was the total opposite of aunt amrita. She was much prettier
and loved Sapna truly.
Sapna was sitting there thinking of all this and at the same time
wishing a miracle would happen and that Sameer would came and took
her with him. She knew it wasn't possible since he didn't even know
that she was leaving today. At that moment the announcer called her
flight. She picks up her bag and turns around. She wished he was
standing there with opened arms and that she would run in his arms
but he wasn't there. She lowers her eyelashes and walked on. Going
inside the corridor that leads to the plane's gate, she once again
looks back with a dreadful expression on her face that said many
things but ofcorce the only person that would have been able to read
it wasn't there. She enters the plane. At the same time Sameer enters
the airport. Keeping his eyes open and searching for Sapna, he missed
seeing flight 164 fly outside the window. He goes up to an assistance
lady sitting near by, "excuse me" he said.
She had glasses on which were practically falling off of her nose.
"Yes?" she asks.
"Flight 164..." said Sameer.
"It has already left sir!"
It was as if somebody had dropped a thunder ball on him. He backed
away from the desk with his brown eyes twinkling from the tears in
them. He felt hurt and lonely. His suddenly realized something, his
first true love was away from him. He felt it was too late, he was
never going to see her again. He felt himself falling so he sat down
on a bench. Everything started spinning in his head. His moments with
Sapna. His love confession, her staring into hi eyes, him getting
closer to her/////
He covered his face with his hands and then looked on the floor.
Their lying on the floor was a picture of him and Sapna taken about 3
yrs ago. He picked it up. It was taken when they had taken a trip to
Europe. Sameer had a rose in his hand and he squirted water out of it
making Sapna's face wet. He smiled at the thought remembering how
much she had hit him them.
`wait…' he thought.
`How did this picture get here?' then he remembered giving it to
Sapna.
"She was looking at it before she left" he heard someone in the back.
He turned around. It was a lady dressed in slawar kamees. "I think it
means a lot to her, since she was crying looking at it. If I was u,
dear, I wouldn't let her go just like that." with that the lady
left. 
Sameer smiled sheepishly. He wasn't going to let her go just like
that.

*looking forward to your replies.*
bye everybody
Qandeel


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wow! that was soooo good! ( sorry im still behind and want 2 catch up quickly)

anyway cant wait 2 read the next part, keep it up!

Ruqs

  saiqaahmad <saiqaahmad@...> wrote:

hey guys!  i am so happy to be back here!  well...im gonna get to my
next part as its been a long time since i last posted......in the
last part....i told you guys that rahul and shalini would be alone
for the next week......well...heres the next part!

Part 25(sliver jubilee heheheh)
_____________________________

         The days until priya would leave seemed endless to rahul and
shalini and the days were going by like months, much to their
exasperation.  Finally, after what seemed like 10 years, tuesday
arrived and there was havoc spread around the household.
     "where are my shoes.....where is my purse......i found my
shoes....oops, no i didnt these are my black ones...where are my
white ones....", priya could be heard screaming at the top pf her
lungs.
        "aik minute ke liye chup ho jao aur tumhe apne jootay mil
jaaein ge!", said shalini. (shut your mouth for just one second and
then you'll find your friggin' shoes!  loose translation hehehe).
        Rahul was in his room, listening to all the chaos occuring
outside.  he called up sameer and asked him if he could drop priya
off at the airport.  sameer agreed and so rahul informed priya.
       after 2 hours of shoe-hunts and packing...priya was finally
prepared for her flight. sameer arrived and so priya gave her last
minute speech.
      "now you 2 behave yourselves......no fighting.....and i'll call
you when i get there".
       "priya...they are not your kids here", remarked sameer.
       "what would you know....baby", siad priya makin a face.
      "your the baby", said sameer.
       "na-uh you are !"
       "no you!"
       "you!'
       "you!"
       "BOTH OF YOU ARE", said shalini and rahul in unision.  after a
few minutes of arguing on who the real baby was(which turned out to
be no one).....shalini and rahul managed to drag the twosome out of
the house..
      " phew.....", said shalini, while leaning her back against the
door. "that was harder then i thought it would be".
      she looked over to rahul who had a glint of mischief in his
eyes...he scanned her over sensuously.  he slowly walked over to
shalini...put his hands against the door, literally leaning his whole
body on top of hers.  shalini, who realised what was about to happen,
put her arms around his neck.  rahul began moving his head closer to
her face and then brought his lips to the back of her ear...he
lightly began to kiss her there, and then started to lightly kiss her
neck and then finally he brought his lips to hers and then they
shared the most passionate kiss.  right when they were really getting
into it, they heard the sound they were dreading most.
        DING-DONG.
     shalini groaned in irritation and rahul began slamming his head
against the wall.  shalini began to giggle, told him to behave
himslef and then opened the door.
        who else could it be but priya.
        "sorry...i forgot my passport."
         she quickly went into her room and got it and then once
again began to speak.
       "there i got it.  cant leave without this can i".  she began
to laugh hysterically and then when she noticed that no one else
found the remark humourous, shut her mouth.
       "you know...its not my fault", priya began. " my brain is
kinda muddled up these days and i have no idea what i should do about
it.. you know those informercials for those memory loss pills, maybe
i need those...or maybe......"
         "Good-bye Priya!", yelled shalini and then priya left
without saying a word.
         rahul and shalini began to laugh and then they went into the
kitchen, hand in hand.  this week would be the best and after
that...they would have the time of their life....at least thats what
they thought.
~ok  thats it for now.....i am introducing a hint of a twist but it
wont come anytime soon...maybe in the next 3, 4 parts(i think). 
please feel free to comment and critisize!


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Hey sham, i havent read any of ur story yet but i want 2. is it in the files section? if not do u think u could send it 2 me?

thanxs

ruqs

  sham_710 <Sham_710@...> wrote:

Seema and Ravi were stting at a table talking quietly. The couples on
the dancefloor got her attention. Ravi saw her wistful look. Reacing
his hand across the table he grasped her hand. Seema looked at
him. "Dance with me" He said. They swung on the dance floor. Seema
signalled the Band to play a racy number. The band played a tune that
had some swinging salsa beats. Ravi surprised her by knowing all the
moves. He twisted her out and swung her into a low dip. Seema
squealed. It had ben so long since she had truly danced. Ravi's fluid
body matched her flexible one. The sexy salsa was upbeat and they had
formed an audience. Ravi picked her up and threw her in the air and
then caught her neatly as she landed into his arms. They moved in a
series of swings and spins, Seema had never danced with so much
passion in her life. Something about the spanish beats and Ravi
combined made her want to dance harder. Ravi felt more alive than he
had felt before. Seema was a sexy and able partner. Her hips moved to
the beat and she easily swung into his arms. It felt like they had
done this before. They were so intuned with the way they were
dancing. It looked to the audiance that they had practised but Ravi
and Seema knew that they were dancing how they felt. Two songs later
they were out of breath. A waiter brought them a glass of water each.
They still held onto eachother while they drank it. Breathing hard
they got back on the dancefloor. This song was little slower. Seema's
heart was beating wildly against her chest. Suddenly the wild passion
mood changed. The lights had slightly dimmed. The whole room was
bathed in a red orange glow.

The slow steady rythms were seductive. His eyes had filled with an
emotion she couldn't read.  Ravi placed one hand on her back and the
other covered her own hand over his heart. Seema was confused 'Oh no.
We're back to playing that game. Things are going to heat up. Then
he'll push me away and we'll be just friends. Put a stop to it' But
she couldn't. All she could do was stare into his eyes. They were a
unique shade of brown. Almost a mixture of  green brown and grey. His
heart was still pounding just like hers. Getting all her willpower
together to stop, Seema tried to pull away. Ravi's grip instintively
tightened on her. "Don't go" His eyes pleaded with her. One look at
his vunerable face and she lost all her will to leave. Ravi pulled
her closer. It was hard to tell if there was a place where they
weren't touching. Seema closed her eyes. She could smell that
familiar scent that always surrounded him. The mixture of leather,
his masculine cologne and a smell that was him alone. It was
beautiful scent.

Ravi was having similar thoughts about the angel in his arms. She fit
in so perfectly against him. Like it was where they were both meant
to be. He remembered the first time he saw her. When she had taken
her helmet off after she had beat him in a race. He hadn't known that
there was a girl on that silver motorcycle. Much less a girl so
beautiful. She was so different from every other girl he met. For one
she was so unpredictable. You couldn't call her a stereotype. He felt
her pull back. Instintively he had held her more tightly. At that
moment nothing else mattered. She was with him. He knew his heart was
pounding. She had that effect on him. He looked at her. He wanted to
remember everything about this moment til the day he died. The way
she was so close to him. The way her hair glowed, her eyes were
closed but he had seen the sparkle in them. Her incredible smile.
Every curve on her face. Everything. He wanted to remember
everything. He then closed his eyes and kept moving with her. His
cheek found a resting place against her silky hair.

Their moment was interupted by Ajay. "May I dance with my sister
please?" Ravi reluctantly let go of Seema. Ajay smiled and gently
swung Seema at a respectable distance. "I don't know whether to thank
you or be very mad a you." Seema said. "Why?" Ajay asked confused.
"Because if you hadn't Ravi and I would be right back where we
started."
"I was just trying to give you two some breathing space from
eachother."
"Thanks Bhaiya. But I think I'm done with dancing. I need some fresh
air." She motioned with her eyes to Reena to come over. Reena caught
her look and and made her way towards them. Seema smiled at her
brother and said "Time for you and your fiance to glide on the
dancefloor. Bye Bhaiya"
Seema neatly swung away and Reena replaced her. Reena held onto Ajay
tightly. "Why did you really seperate them, Ajay? Feeling
protective?" Ajay looked at the woman in his arms. He was amazed at
how well she could read him. "I can't help it okay. She's my baby
sister." Reena smiled kindly. "Ajay sooner or later we all know Seema
has to grow up. That means she'll meet someone. In fact she already
has. Just be happy for her. She'll always be your baby sister." Ajay
stared at Reena "How do you always know what to say?" Reena shrugged
and whispered in his ear "Woman's intuition"  Ajay grinned and swung
Reena out and pulled her back really close. "Well I'm glad you have
it"

Seema stood in the balcony of the restaurant. The view was
incredible. Lights shimmerinmg and tall scrapers in the distance. The
chilly air made her shiver slightly. Then a leather jacket was placed
on her shoulders. Seema turned only to come face to face with
Ravi. "Don't want you to get cold" He said gently rubbing her arms.
He was standing very close. "Ravi, don't. I'm sick of this game we
play. I can't keep being ''just friends'' with you if every now and
again things with us keep heating up." Ravi stepped back and looked
away. "Sorry. I don't..........well I don't really know what to say.
Just that I'm sorry." He looked so helpless at that moment that Seema
wished she could take his pain away. Seema stepped foward and put one
hand on his cheek . "It's ok. I didn't mean to cause you pain. I just
don't understand how you feel about me and it confuses me and
sometimes makes me angry." Ravi walked to the edge and put both his
hands on the railing. "I wish I wasn't the one hurting you Seema. You
deserve so much better." Seema walked behind him and said
determindly "Don't I deserve what I want?" Ravi faced her "What do
you want?" he asked. Seema looked at him with determination
said "You" With that she placed both her hands on either sides of his
face and kissed him. She tried to convey her feelings through the
kiss. Ravi took a second to respond eagerly. He placed both his hands
on her back and pulled her closer. This kiss wasn't as fierce as the
last one. It was more emotional. Ravi's lips were gentle but strong.
Seema could only eagerly keep kissing him. Soon it became too
overwhelming to Ravi. "Seema stop. I can't.... I can't give you what
you want." Seema stood there confused and bewildered. "Ravi, Don't!!
All I want is you. After that kiss I know you feel the same so what's
wrong?" Her eyes were brimming with tears. Ravi looked at her with
anger. "You deserve better damn it!! You deserve a guy who'll love
you unconditionally for the rest of your life!! I can't be that
guy" "Why not? Is there someone else? You don't love me? What?" The
hurt on her face filled Ravi's eyes with tears.Grabbing her shoulders
he said firmly "I can't explain it to you" Seema looked straight in
his eyes and asked in an angry voice "Can't explain it or won't tell
me?!! Damn it, Ravi after everything we've been through don't you
think I have a right to know." Ravi let go of her and turned away.

"Ravi please tell me" Seema pleaded. She put her hand on his shoulder
and tried to make him turn. Rasvi unexpeactedly stumbled. He caught
the railing before he hit the ground. "Ravi" Seema shouted. She ran
beside his bent figure and tried to help him up. He pushed her
away. "You wanna know what's wrong with me? This is it. If you're
ready to face it Seema. Here's the truth. I'M DYING."




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its really good! i love it !
zara
ps- make loads more!! ure really good at it!




--- In kajolworld@y..., eda da <miss_eda2001@y...> wrote:
>
>
>
> actually..nothing new with it..cos i just cut and paste..but i'm
glad to shared it wih u guys!!
>
> eda
>
>
>
> ---------------------------------
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ok im sure sum1 has already posted the rs on here already!
and i no many like me ARE reall upset due to the success of it! but
listen komal gave this film 8 outta 10 ok????
and he gave k3g 3.5 outta 5 RITE>>!!!?? so if we calculate it
k3g- 7 outta 10
and devdas 8 outta 10!!
and i can understand y as u no..and we ALL no no one can ever
replaces kads and srk! so i think im just gona join in the fun and
4get all this jealously for a while cos it really does put u down!!
im wont paste teh review actauly cos sum1 already has!
but i hope  did make a point!
luv zara

i had the same impression( of course as u!) i only liked the songs
and dances!
zara








--- In kajolworld@y..., "arfan12000" <arfan12000@y...> wrote:
> hey guys, sorry for that but i have to admit that i am not at all
> excited about devdas.......i know i'm being stupid and biased but i
> just can't help my feelings......komal's review of ashwariya's
> performance where she says no actress could have played it better(i
> don't remember the exact words but it was something like that)just
> freaked me out.....i am unbelievably pathetic......but i could
never
> ever imagine shahrukh with any other actress specially in a
romantic
> role......no matter how brilliant the director is(as sanjay is one
of
> my favorites) or how good the movie is......sorry for this but i
had
> to express it!!!
> sorry again
> mehreen

hey qandeel sorry for psting to u late!!
well ive posted u up my devdas review!lol
that was really gd OMG wat the hell is rohan doing there??!?!!!!!!?!?!
hey liksten this is probably a realy dump question but hey im come up
with the guts to ask u - ahem..lol soz but r u a girl or a buy??!!!
cos i no a guy called qandeel etc...so i was just wondering!
oh yeh and u asked me what other actresses i liked! um.........
wel i like kareena althought she is a btich lol only cos i like her
and her sisters fashion sense there clothes etc i always sometimes
make my parents buy me wat they r wearing! i think i love ash aswell!
so it goes like this-
kads
ash...mostly her dancing too but shes a good actress!
madz..(only her dancing!!lol)
kareena and karisma
zara












--- In kajolworld@y..., "kiran50274" <kiran50274@y...> wrote:
> HI guys,
> Firstly I want to thanks to jenn, mahreen, eda, sana, pakeeza,
aisha,
> tusi, ruqs and anyone else who has read or complimented my story.
You
> guys are so nice. Now about your stories they are so awesome. Aisha-

> the way the purposing went was so cute but y did that stupid phone
> have to ring at that time. I wish that rahul smashes it instead of
> picking it up. And I love the comedy even though it was crazy. Lol.
> Mahreen- the library scene was so emotional and sad. I hope nisha
> sees that anand doesn't love her really. Great job with the
> dialogues. Tusi- its so mean the way priya keeps on bringing akash
up
> making poor rahul sad. When is she gonna realise rahul's feelings.
> Well I can't wait to see what there next plan is to make aakash
> jealous. Lol. All u other story writers which includes: shahnaz,
> pakeeza, neha, sush, nayahai, rani, please keep posting your story.
> (sorry if I missed anyone). And thanku sarah, I just saw your post
> and I'm glad u like my story.
> Here is my part hope u like it.
>
> AT THE AIRPORT IN AMERICA
> Sapna looks around for her aunt Amrita who was supposed to pick her
> up today. It had been a long journey for Sapna. The ride to here
> seemed too long. She was already in a bad mood and now her auntie
was
> going to ruin it more by being late. She looked around and spots
her
> aunt Nargis waving to her. A smile spreads across Sapna's face.
> "Oh auntie I missed u so much," she said hugging her.
> "I missed u too sweetie" Her aunt looked like a doll in a white
> sparkly sari.
> "Auntie u look so nice,"
> "alloo ji, mein agai kabi buri lagi hoon (do I ever look bad?)"
joked
> aunt nargis.
> They both laughed. "Aunti, Khushboo and Auntie Amrita didn't come?"
> she asked as they headed to their car.
> "Sapna u know your aunt right? She has been at the beauty parlor
all
> day long and then she realized she was getting late so she called
me
> to pick u up."
> Sapna rolled her eyes. "So what else is new?" she said being
> sarcastic.
> "Hey is it that bad to have me pick u up," asked her aunt.
> "Aunti! U know its always nice to see u!"
>
> AT KHUSHBOO'S HOUSE
> Sapna and her aunt reached the house before khushboo and her mom.
But
> as soon as they did get home it was as if they had never
> gone. "KHUSHBOO!!" the girls hugged and started chatting. All day
> long the house was a chatter box with people dropping in to say hi.
> Or Sapna and Khushboo's conversation: "o I like your nails!," "what
> have u done with your hair," " I like your outfit!".
> Or Sapna and aunt amrita's conversation: "o how is your dad?"
> or "when is he coming over?"
>
> THREE DAYS LATER
> There were all these kids at her aunts house that Sapna didn't even
> know! They were all relatives of her dad who wasn't even there. So
> instead Sapna had to put up with them. It wasn't a bad thing
though,
> she was actually really enjoying it. This was the first time in her
> life that she was around so many people. Usually it was just her
dad
> and her but now she was getting the nice feeling of being around a
> bigger family. Like today they had all decided to go out and play
> cricket in the lawn.
> Tommy, her 5 yr. Old cousin, was up first. Khushboo was pitching.
She
> threw the ball softly. The boy flung the bat and instead of hitting
> the ball he went in circles. Everyone started laughing. "Hey I'm
> telling my mommy on u!!" he said and stomped inside the house. "Hey
> game to hatam kar jao (hey finish the game atleast)" yelled Cindy
in
> after him but he was too angry to listen. Next up was Robbie. He
was
> a boy much older, like 11. He hit the ball and it flew right across
> the lawn and into aunt amrita's tea cup that she was having  with
> nargis. Nargis started laughing but then tried to stop it after
> seeing the look on amrita's face.
> After that it was Sapna's turn. She was a bit nervous for she
wasn't
> at all good at cricket. Her hands started getting sweaty and she
kind
> of got butterflies in her stomach. She was really surprised at this
> for she didn't think she would get nervous over such a little
thing.
> But it wasn't how far she hit her ball that worried her, it was
> something else. Something she couldn't figure out. Khushboo pitched
> and Sapna hit it. It was a fly ball and she was sure no one was
going
> to catch it. But someone did catch it and it wasn't any of the
kids.
> It wasn't Khushboo either. It was Rohan.
>
> please respond guys. i love reading them. thanku
>
> QANDEEL

plz do post the rest soon neha!
luv zara







--- In kajolworld@y..., "srknkajol4evr" <Ahen717@a...> wrote:
> hi everyone...
> i am working on the next part of my story...there isnt much left to
> it, so u can kind of guess wats going to happen soon.
> however, im really excited about this other idea i have...its
> practically the opposite of the one im writing now but actually its
> also really similar...i hope u guys wont mind...lol anywaaaaaaaays
> its coming soon, but thanx everyone for waiting.
> as for everyone who keeps posting...thanx so much guys...u guys r
> awesome and so r ur stories!!!!!! everyone is doing great...and btw
> welcome sush! ur story is excellent...keep posting!!! =)
> love
> neha

hey guys!!
well im soooo sorry for posting this late for one thing i was really
busy yesterday as i did see this film AGEN!! lol i no im mad but ah
well! and im writing this on the behalf of QANDEEL!!

so im gona try and make this long!"!!( im starting with an overall
impression!)

ok sooo DEVDAS....lol well i think it was hyped up a BITTTT toooooo
much because although i havent seen the last one really properly i
thought that although my expectations i was disappointed at the end!
actually the real thing abt the film are songs which i must admit
were absolutely beutiiful!!!
so i thought it was NOT as good as i thought it would be- srk did a
really good job but its just the role i think that didnt suite him
gr8ely....the film was not as gr8 as gold but i do think it deserved
abt the same as k3g or a bit more..im serious i still liked k3g alot
more- i guess maybe this wasnt my type of film...and im sorry to say
i didnt cry as much as i thought i would only at the last scene i
could feel a lump in my throat!!

ok soo.... the best things in the film -
- the first part when srk see`s ash lying on the bed that was
beutiful and also cos they played part of woh chand jaisi ladki and
the first few mins with the silsila yeh chahaat ka was amazing ash
danced soooooooooooo gracefully her hand movements were soooo! WOW!
i really think ash did the best job overall in the film- one cos i do
like her dancing alot more than madz...allthough madz is more
experienced i jus liked ash`s way of it better!
- i went to se it twice only 4 the songs- actually the first time i
saw it i was like omg and couldnt take all of it really IN it was too
much..but this film has had the BEST ever dance sequences ever in it!
- ash looked beutiful i mean she looked amazing especially in the
morey piya song where her and srk are romancing near a river or
summing her mum was going a BIT OTT in the song i though though! but
the blue looked realy nice on her like the one she wore in hddcs in
the chand chupa song!
the sets were really nice - and the parts with the binoculars wen srk
n ash kept loking for eachother was really sweet! and the bairi piya
song was nice also and i htough the bit when hes actuially meant to
open the bracelt in which he didnt was quite funny!
- srks drunken roles were well executed but i hadnever seen him do
such a role b4 so i was a bit strucken to....his dialgoes were really
good though and i think the best shot scene was the last one
when he promises to go back to ashs house man i was getting all hyped
cos ash didnt realise until the end it was devdas lying dead at her
doorstep and she thought it was some other guy- and when she is
forbidden to step outa the house and the gates are commaded to shut
rite on her just as she reached the gate and devdas` last brath is
taken an his hands falls donw i thought that was soo beutifully
executed it was an amazing ending depressing but gr8ely shot!
- madz was a pleasure of course to watch her dances were gr8 and the
part where srk tells her he loves her was really heartly..i felt
realy sorry for her in the film i guess that was what impression she
did want to show us as a prostitue etc....and all the stuff said to
her was really horrible but she stood up for herself really well..and
the dola re dola song was the best wen i get my dvd im gona watch
that song a million times ! also the maar dala the two had the best
ever dance steps and my nani outta all of us loved these all os they
WERE DECENT DANCES INSTEAD OF THE USUALY CRAPPY AEROBICS U USUALY
SEE! lol
well ive probably spoiled completely the WHOLE entire film for neone
hoo hasent seen it yet...but im tellin gya dont go with VERY HIGH
expectations b/c i think u will be a bit disappointed i think it
deserves the same as k3g as i said but a bit higher

overall the dances costumes and set were the gr8est ash was the best
performance followed by srk then madz..jackie also did an excellent
job! i think its not a film like k3g where u can watch all of the
scenes agen and agen and the dialouges i think ppl like me will buy
it on dvd or vhs for the songs to watch again and again
sooo PLZ go and watch this film ! and im sure ull enjoy it 1!!i give
it abt 7 outta 10

luv ya all
zara ;-)

--- oh my god!!! mehreennnnn i feel the exact way as you do!!!  i'm
readin all these reviews and i feel absolutely horrible....i dont
know here this hosla has come from that i havent thrashed my computer
screen yet!  i hate hearing all these compliments for ash because
frankly...i really dont like her...and yes i love sanjay too but srk
and ash is one couple i despise terribly!  by the way have you seen
the movie yet?
         -aisah
In kajolworld@y..., "arfan12000" <arfan12000@y...> wrote:
> hey guys, sorry for that but i have to admit that i am not at all
> excited about devdas.......i know i'm being stupid and biased but i
> just can't help my feelings......komal's review of ashwariya's
> performance where she says no actress could have played it better(i
> don't remember the exact words but it was something like that)just
> freaked me out.....i am unbelievably pathetic......but i could
never
> ever imagine shahrukh with any other actress specially in a
romantic
> role......no matter how brilliant the director is(as sanjay is one
of
> my favorites) or how good the movie is......sorry for this but i
had
> to express it!!!
> sorry again
> mehreen

actually..nothing new with it..cos i just cut and paste..but i'm glad to shared it wih u guys!!

eda

Qandeell..oh no..rohan was there!!hope Sameer will tell her that he
luv her...plzz post the rest asap!!

eda



--- In kajolworld@y..., "kiran50274" <kiran50274@y...> wrote:
> HI guys,
> Firstly I want to thanks to jenn, mahreen, eda, sana, pakeeza,
aisha,
> tusi, ruqs and anyone else who has read or complimented my story.
You
> guys are so nice. Now about your stories they are so awesome. Aisha-

> the way the purposing went was so cute but y did that stupid phone
> have to ring at that time. I wish that rahul smashes it instead of
> picking it up. And I love the comedy even though it was crazy. Lol.
> Mahreen- the library scene was so emotional and sad. I hope nisha
> sees that anand doesn't love her really. Great job with the
> dialogues. Tusi- its so mean the way priya keeps on bringing akash
up
> making poor rahul sad. When is she gonna realise rahul's feelings.
> Well I can't wait to see what there next plan is to make aakash
> jealous. Lol. All u other story writers which includes: shahnaz,
> pakeeza, neha, sush, nayahai, rani, please keep posting your story.
> (sorry if I missed anyone). And thanku sarah, I just saw your post
> and I'm glad u like my story.
> Here is my part hope u like it.
>
> AT THE AIRPORT IN AMERICA
> Sapna looks around for her aunt Amrita who was supposed to pick her
> up today. It had been a long journey for Sapna. The ride to here
> seemed too long. She was already in a bad mood and now her auntie
was
> going to ruin it more by being late. She looked around and spots
her
> aunt Nargis waving to her. A smile spreads across Sapna's face.
> "Oh auntie I missed u so much," she said hugging her.
> "I missed u too sweetie" Her aunt looked like a doll in a white
> sparkly sari.
> "Auntie u look so nice,"
> "alloo ji, mein agai kabi buri lagi hoon (do I ever look bad?)"
joked
> aunt nargis.
> They both laughed. "Aunti, Khushboo and Auntie Amrita didn't come?"
> she asked as they headed to their car.
> "Sapna u know your aunt right? She has been at the beauty parlor
all
> day long and then she realized she was getting late so she called
me
> to pick u up."
> Sapna rolled her eyes. "So what else is new?" she said being
> sarcastic.
> "Hey is it that bad to have me pick u up," asked her aunt.
> "Aunti! U know its always nice to see u!"
>
> AT KHUSHBOO'S HOUSE
> Sapna and her aunt reached the house before khushboo and her mom.
But
> as soon as they did get home it was as if they had never
> gone. "KHUSHBOO!!" the girls hugged and started chatting. All day
> long the house was a chatter box with people dropping in to say hi.
> Or Sapna and Khushboo's conversation: "o I like your nails!," "what
> have u done with your hair," " I like your outfit!".
> Or Sapna and aunt amrita's conversation: "o how is your dad?"
> or "when is he coming over?"
>
> THREE DAYS LATER
> There were all these kids at her aunts house that Sapna didn't even
> know! They were all relatives of her dad who wasn't even there. So
> instead Sapna had to put up with them. It wasn't a bad thing
though,
> she was actually really enjoying it. This was the first time in her
> life that she was around so many people. Usually it was just her
dad
> and her but now she was getting the nice feeling of being around a
> bigger family. Like today they had all decided to go out and play
> cricket in the lawn.
> Tommy, her 5 yr. Old cousin, was up first. Khushboo was pitching.
She
> threw the ball softly. The boy flung the bat and instead of hitting
> the ball he went in circles. Everyone started laughing. "Hey I'm
> telling my mommy on u!!" he said and stomped inside the house. "Hey
> game to hatam kar jao (hey finish the game atleast)" yelled Cindy
in
> after him but he was too angry to listen. Next up was Robbie. He
was
> a boy much older, like 11. He hit the ball and it flew right across
> the lawn and into aunt amrita's tea cup that she was having  with
> nargis. Nargis started laughing but then tried to stop it after
> seeing the look on amrita's face.
> After that it was Sapna's turn. She was a bit nervous for she
wasn't
> at all good at cricket. Her hands started getting sweaty and she
kind
> of got butterflies in her stomach. She was really surprised at this
> for she didn't think she would get nervous over such a little
thing.
> But it wasn't how far she hit her ball that worried her, it was
> something else. Something she couldn't figure out. Khushboo pitched
> and Sapna hit it. It was a fly ball and she was sure no one was
going
> to catch it. But someone did catch it and it wasn't any of the
kids.
> It wasn't Khushboo either. It was Rohan.
>
> please respond guys. i love reading them. thanku
>
> QANDEEL

oh..no Aisha..plz dont do that..who's calling..i can feel something
bad will happen to them..oh i hope they will together..always!!

eda

--- In kajolworld@y..., "saiqaahmad" <saiqaahmad@y...> wrote:
> hey guys!  well, i have to say that when i posted part 25 up of my
> story i noticed that no one else was posting and i was reallly
> disappointed but now.....there are new parts up everyday and i am
> ecstatic!  first of all, tusi...did u have to stop there huh?  did
> you have to leave me hanging!  how could you! now until and unless
> you post up your next parts(notice the plural), our speaking
> conditions are disconnected!!!(sorry, i tend to get worked up
> hehehe).....secondly, shahnaz:  did you have to stop there?  did u
> have to leave me hanging? lol, just kidding...yaar, i love your
story
> sooooo much!  it is unbelievable...the relationship pooja and
sameer
> have is so unlikely....and i cant wait for it to evolve into
> something more......you better post!  Rani:  why are you postin up
> old parts!!!! please, if you were at my house right now you would
see
> me begging on my hands and knees for you to post up new parts!
> please...i cannot wait any longer!!  Qandeell!!!  wheres is "hum
tere
> dewanee hain"!!!!  i wanna see what happens when sameer goes to
> america!! please let him get back his sapna!  pakeeza: you deserve
an
> individual message..and i am posting one so please read it...you'll
> understand once you read it ok?  and last(but never ever least),
> mehreen:  dont stop!!! i want to know what her answer is!!!  how
can
> you put me through this torture...how can you make me suffer!!!  i
> seriously cant believe raj...why is he forcing his beloved to make
a
> decision...he should understand that this is a complicated point in
> nisha's life....look at me i'm rambling on and on like they are a
> real couple!!  anyways...please please please post more up as soon
as
> possible....oh yeah and i forgot, zara:  NO ONE IS GOING TO DIE
MAN!!
> lol.....well...heres the next part...hope you guys enjoy it!
>
> Part 28
> __________________________
>
>         In the car, Rahul could hardly contain himself....he wanted
> to get to the house as soon as possible, time was playing games
with
> him....whenever he wanted time to pass by, it would go by slower
then
> the word, "slow" and when he wanted to savor the moments, the time
> would pass by like a speeding bullet.  finally they reached the
> building.
>        "hey sameer, why dont you come up for some coffee", asked
> shalini.
>     priya and rahul began swishing their heads from side to side,
> attempting sameer to decline the offer but you know sameer.
>       "hey guys, do u have neck cramps or something?  anyway, yeah
> sure i'll come up for some coffee".
>          as they were walking up to rahuls apartment, priya elbowed
> sameer in the stomach.
>      "you idiot!", she whispered, "rahul is going to propose!!!  we
> had to leave the two alone".
>       "oh damn it, i forgot.....am i the biggest dummy in the world
> or what......i know, i'll make an excuse", whispered back
> sameer, "hey shalini, i just remembered, uhhh....ummm.....my turtle
> has a fracture in his leg, and i....ii.....well, i have to take him
> to the vet.....yeah, thats right, i have to take my turtle, pukey,
to
> the vet".
>         priya was flabergasted.
>      "you have to take your turtle to the vet at 9:00 at night",
> asked shalini. "and he has a fractured leg?"
>      "you named your turtle......pukey?", asked rahul.
>      "yeah, you know...turtles are green....puke is gr----".
>       "ok ok ok ok, please...no details!  uhh, sameer, forget it,
you
> are not going anywhere", said priya, pulling him by the arm.
>        "but i thought-"
>        "no 'buts'", priya responded.
>    right when this, slightly disturbing conversation was over, they
> reached the room.......as they entered, shalini went straight into
> the kitchen to turn the kettle on.
>      "both of you..get out of here now', urged rahul.
>      "i told him to", said priya, "but then he said he would make
up
> an excuse......you have a turtle?", she asked sameer.
>       "not the last time i checked,"replied sameer.
>      " i dont care about the turtle...guys please!!  for one second
> let me think....uhh...why dont you go to sameers apartment for a
> little while...please....this is the moment of my life, and i dont
> want it to be spoiled.....".
>      Priya nodded and the two sped away before shalini could get
out
> of the kitchen.  when she did exit, she began to ask questions from
> rahul, who was sitting on the couch.
>        "hey, where did those two go:, she asked holding 4 mugs in a
> tray.
>        "uh, they just stepped out for a minute....dont worry,
they'll
> be back soon....uhh, sweetie, why dont you come over here, and sit
> for a while."
>        shalini, who's initial reaction was an expression of
> confusion, went over to where rahul was sitting, put the tray down
> and sat down beside him.  shalini put her hand on his shoulder and
> asked what was wrong.
>        "you look tense", she said.
>      Rahul who relized he was sweating from head to toe
replied, "no,
> no i'm ok".
>        "you want me to get you some cold water.......or maybe i
could
> whip up some....."
>      Rahul put his finger on her lips...."no, i dont need
> anything...i'm ok........is that how much you care for me"?
>       "what do u mean", shalini asked, completely dazed.
>       "if i suddenly lost my job, and my fortune collapsed, would
you
> still love me"?
>        "rahul!  what kind of question is this!  of course i would,
my
> love for you is unconditional".
>        Rahul looked at her and smiled.  "For richer or poorer".
>         "huh", was shalinis reaction.  Rahul began to slightly
laugh
> and then he held her hand in his.
>       "if i fell sick, would you care and nurture me back to my
full
> recovery"?
>          "Rahul!  what has gotten into you!  of course i would
> sweetie", she said while holding his face with her hands.
>         Rahul once again smiled and said, "In sickness or in
health".
>         Shalini must have begun to catch on, because she looked at
> him, first in confoundment and then, she gave him a shy smile.
>        "promise me now.....that you would love me eternally...that
> you would always be mine".
>      now shalini had no words to express her feelings...she just
> looked at him, tears welling up in her eyes, and slightly nodded
her
> head.
>       Rahul now bent down on one knee, still holding her hand and
> this time he said, "Till Death Shall we part".
>        "oh my god", were the words that shalini just managed to
spill
> out.
>      "shalini", rahul began, "after the heartbreak i went through
> after priya left me, i thought i would never love again....and then
> you came along.....i thought of you to be the life-saver that i was
> always hoping for....praying for.......the time that we spent
togther
> was the most joyous i've ever had and i'll always cherish
it.....for
> daysi thought about asking you a question...".  at this point,
> shalini began to tremble with excitement....she was anticipating
this
> moment for her whole life....
>       " shalini, i thought about it and i actually doubted myself
for
> quite a while.....could i provide for you everything you would
> need.....could i fulfill the duties of a husband.....would this
> relationship between us last forever?  i thought and thought but
the
> answers you gave me right now to my questions.....they cleared up
> every dark cloud in my mind".  now rahul reached inside his jacket
> and took out the small velvet jewllers box....
>         "you told me, the first day that we met that you adored the
> ocean.....it gave me the impression of you being very emotional and
> spiritual....i thought, so that i could make you happier then any
> other man could on this planet, i would customise a ring especially
> for you........".  now he took the ring out of the box and when
> shalini saw it, she gasped with amazement.
>       "oh my god, rahul......you must have spent a fortune on this".
>        "you like it"?
>        "are you kidding me, i love it......rahul...are these
supposed
> to be dolphins?"
>       "uhh...yeah".
>         shalini's eyes once again began to fill with tears as she
> flung herself into rahuls arms.  rahul began to grin madly and
then,
> once again they got into their initial positions.  rahul took the
> ring and began sliding it onto her finger...halfway through, it got
> stuck.....it was a tiny bit too small.
>       "shit", rahul said gruffly.  shalini began to giggle a tiny
bit
> but then seeing the exasperation on rahuls face, she stopped.
>       "it's ok honey".
>        "no no its not......today was supposed to be perfect", he
said.
>     shalini didnt want to disappoint the love of her life so she
> thought like crazy about what could be done....and then finally,
> using the brilliant brain that she had, she came up with an idea.
>      "i know what to do", she said.  she remembered that her father
> had gifted her with a - delicate silver chain before he died, that
> she would always wear for good luck......she took it off and then
> took the ring out of rahuls hand.  rahul looked at shalini with
> amazement.
>      "you are brilliant".  he took the ring, which was whitegold so
> it matched amazingly with the chain and slipped it into the chain.
> then he delicately put it around shalinis neck.  he began stroking
> her face with his fingers gently and then came the time that he
would
> pop that magical, life-changing question.
>       "shalini singh, my love, ........will you mar-"
>    BBRRRIIINNNGG, went the phone.

SHAHNZ, YOU TOLD ME TO READ OTHER STORIES AND I CAME ACROSS THE LAST PARTS YOU
SENT OF YOURS . I READ THEM AND I LOVED THEM.
I CAN FEEL HE IS GOING TO FALL MADLY IN LOVE WITH HER WITHOUT KNOWING.
KEEP POSTING , IAM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE COMING EVENTS .
THANK YO

hey mehreen :)
it is ok, but why dont u see it ?
u might like the film, forget about ash .
try to enjoy it .
dont prevent your self from seeing it , it is an experience that u should live .

:)

--- In kajolworld@y..., "arfan12000" <arfan12000@y...> wrote:
> hey guys, sorry for that but i have to admit that i am not at all
> excited about devdas.......i know i'm being stupid and biased but i
> just can't help my feelings......komal's review of ashwariya's
> performance where she says no actress could have played it better(i
> don't remember the exact words but it was something like that)just
> freaked me out.....i am unbelievably pathetic......but i could never
> ever imagine shahrukh with any other actress specially in a romantic
> role......no matter how brilliant the director is(as sanjay is one of
> my favorites) or how good the movie is......sorry for this but i had
> to express it!!!
> sorry again
> mehreen

hey shahnaz :
thank you
:)

--- In kajolworld@y..., *shahnaz* <brown_eyes2201@y...> wrote:
> Sana,
>
> It means , "Actually, I prefer Kajol."
>
> *shahnaz*
>
>
> --- sangelkw <no_reply@y...> wrote:
> > guys :
> > i hope you dont mind , but i read your messages, and
> > pleaswe can you
> > tell me what is the meaning of this :
> > (("Actually, saya lebih suka Kajol!"))
> > thank you .
> > dont mind ha :)
> >
> > --- In kajolworld@y..., krezy_j <no_reply@y...>
> > wrote:
> > > Shahnaz.....hahahahaaa!!!! syabas to your friend
> > Azra...please give
> > > her a high 5 for me...i think i too would have
> > said the same thing.
> > I
> > > have to see the interview on TV, again when is
> > it???? "..Saya lebih
> > > suka Kajol!""" ah that is hilarious! actually i
> > too do not quite
> > like
> > > aishwarya, i feel that she anbd like kareena
> > kapoor just want to be
> > > with srk, but i have to see the movie first to see
> > how they paired
> > > together. reading what you have wrote...sounds
> > like it was better
> > > thatn kkkg??? Hope to hear a reply from you, Jenn
> > >
> > >
> > > --- In kajolworld@y..., *shahnaz*
> > <brown_eyes2201@y...> wrote:
> > > > eda...
> > > >
> > > > Aww, that's bad... But eda, tolong la tgk the
> > > > interviews, aight? :) Check out my friend,
> > Azra...
> > > > When the interviewer asked her opinion on
> > Aishwarya
> > > > Rai, she said.."Actually, saya lebih suka
> > Kajol!"
> > > > Hahahahhaa.. You should see the interviewer's
> > face...
> > > >
> > > > *shahnaz*
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > --- miss_eda2001 <miss_eda2001@y...> wrote:
> > > > > OMG shahnaz......u watched it, plz plz tell us
> > more
> > > > > abt it..!! i will
> > > > > not able to watch it until the vcd is out 4
> > sale (i
> > > > > think they will
> > > > > not show devdas in kelantan)poor of me :O(
> > > > >
> > > > > eda
> > > > > p/s: wow u will be in salaam bollywood and now
> > > > > showing!! i will watch
> > > > > both of it!!
> > > > >
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hey shahnaz :
this is sweet , iliked the scenes u stated here :)
i think ash can balance whatever her head cos she is a model and they do have
such training , ballancing
books n their heads.
thank you :)

--- In kajolworld@y..., "brown_eyes2201" <brown_eyes2201@y...> wrote:
> Hmmm, these are some of the scenes that kept lingering in my head...
>
> 1. When Paro meets her new family... Especially her step son in law,
> where he purposely grabbed her feet, then she pulled his ear... Man,
> if I was in her shoes, I'd do the same thing.
>
> 2. Morey Piya and the confrontation that came later. Wow, how did
> Aish manage to balance that 'thing' on her head, while having
> Shahrukh teasing her like that?
>
> 3. When Devdas asked the Panditji to perform his own funeral... I got
> tears in my eyes when I saw that one.
>
> 4. Kaahe Ched and Maar Daala... Do I have to say more??? :)
>
> 5. Madhuri's scene w/srk when she asks if she will ever see him
> again...knowing what the actual anwser to this really is....Yep, that
> was really good. And when he finally said her name "Chandramukhi..."
> Wow, Madhuri's face says it all... Damn, they were really good!
>
> Like you said Minu, we can just go on...
>
> *shahnaz*
>
>
> --- In kajolworld@y..., "fan_of_kajol" <minu_174@h...> wrote:
> > Hi Qandeel yaar,
> > well glad that u liked the...review...!! nehoo just thought I would
> > be quick on this one (but i will give more detail scene
> descriptions
> > once more ppl have seen teh movie) and tell u the scenes that stood
> > out in my mind, regardless of whom was in them:
> >
> > here goes, btw these are SPOILERS..!! So don't read if u don't want
> > to know...
> >
> > Madhuri's confrontation scene w/ash. not a sweet scene but really
> > well performed by both of them. Madhuri excells w/her excellent
> > dialouge dilvery.
> >
> > Madhuri's scene w/srk when she asks if she will ever see him
> > again...knowing what the actual anwser to this really is....
> >
> > srk's scenes w/ash, all of them basically. No cliched lines, just
> > pure words of poetry, truly superb. (especially in the song Bairi
> > Piya and even in Morey Piya). oh and when srk sees ash lying down
> and
> > he goes over to her (he's just returned from london) and touches
> her
> > face, lips etc. very cute(ly) done =)
> >
> > what else...Kiron Kher (who plays srk's mother) when she is told by
> > ash's mom that devdas and paro can not marry and she breaks
> down...it
> > was really sad.
> >
> > The ending...with ash yelling DEVDA...DEVDA....and her husband
> > watching her run towards the gate/door to see Devdas...
> >
> > when srk first picks up a liquor bottle...my god, his eyes say it
> > all. It's like he doesn't want to drink...but doesn't know what
> else
> > to do with out his paro.
> >
> > Paro pleading w/devdas to run away w/her before her parents get her
> > married and devdas refusing her request.
> >
> > I could go on...let me know, i don't want to bore u..!!!
> >
> > love
> > minu
> >
> > p.s. i love ur story...have i mentioned this in the past??! Well
> here
> > it is again, keep it up..!!
> >
> > p.s.s. the surprise packet for me was Kiron Kher's
> performance...all
> > her scenes will make u cry, yell, cheer...she's an amazing actress.
> >
> >
> > --- In kajolworld@y..., "kiran50274" <kiran50274@y...> wrote:
> > > HI Minu,
> > > i'm so glad that u posted up this review because most people who
> > have
> > > wathced it arn't posting up such detailed reviews becuase they
> > dont'
> > > wanna spoil it so i wanna thanku for taking the time to write it.
> i
> > > know what u mean about slb and ash. she's liek a teachers pet
> kind
> > of
> > > like to him. lol. well i havn't seen the movie yet and tell me
> some
> > > more of the highlights of the movie please.
> > > what are the cutest scenes?
> > > Qandeel
> > >
> > > --- In kajolworld@y..., "fan_of_kajol" <minu_174@h...> wrote:
> > > > Hiya guys,
> > > > I haven't been around for a while, so I figured before
> > > I 'offically'
> > > > come back I should give a little post about what I thought
> about
> > > the
> > > > movie =) There's really NO SPOILERS But still be careful, just
> in
> > > > case you don't want to know ANYTHING before u see it.
> > > >
> > > > First things first, I thought that the movie was greeeaaat =)
> But
> > > not
> > > > the best I've seen =( Maybe because I had sky high expectations
> > but
> > > I
> > > > had high expectations for k3g too...Let's just say that if
> Devdas
> > > the
> > > > movie becomes a Legend...I will be happy, but if it doesn't
> then
> > I
> > > > will understand.
> > > >
> > > > Now, before I make any comparisons or whatever, I just want
> > anybody
> > > > (who's gonna read this) to know that I haven't read any reviews
> > > this
> > > > far, not any from the this club(I've been busy...ugh!) or even
> > any
> > > > reviews from the komal's and taran's of the world LOL, so I
> don't
> > > > know what anybody but me, my friend and peeps in the theater
> w/me
> > > > thought about it...
> > > >
> > > > The Performances:
> > > >
> > > > SRK- He was really good. I heard ppl that were sitting beside
> my
> > > guy
> > > > friend [who i went with ;) ] that they thought he was
> overacting
> > in
> > > a
> > > > few scenes...well i didn't think this, in fact I think he
> > overacted
> > > > in k3g (maybe thanks to karan LOL) sometimes, but not in
> devdas.
> > > Was
> > > > he better than Dilip Saab?? Well, i saw the older Bimal Roy
> > verison
> > > > before so I can compare. But to be honest, they are too totally
> > > > different ppl from seprarte generations protraying their own
> > > version
> > > > of the man named Devdas Mukerjee...so comparisons are hard to
> > make
> > > =)
> > > >
> > > > The only thing that I thought was that I do think that OTHER
> > peeps
> > > > (very few though) could have played Devdas, but it would have
> > > turned
> > > > out totally different obviously...But would I have wanted to c
> > > > ANOTHER man play Devdas...NOOO!!
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Aish- Well, I don't like...just thought I would get that out
> > there,
> > > > so this maybe biased, but to be honest, she was
> just......superb
> > =)
> > > > There were a few scenes that she tended to 'stiffen' in, but
> > > overall
> > > > one of her better performances...She had the most time to
> > showcase
> > > > her talent, so maybe that's why...
> > > >
> > > > Madhuri- I can't say enough...from her dances, to her facial
> > > > expressions...they were mindblowing!!!! In fact I am only going
> > to
> > > c
> > > > the flick again because of her...!!!! She was just great, I
> can't
> > > say
> > > > enough.
> > > >
> > > > Jackie- He tended to overact a bit, according to me, but I
> guess
> > > his
> > > > part was the only comic relief (especially in the second half)
> > that
> > > > the viewer noticed, so it's understandable.
> > > >
> > > > Supporting Cast- Were all brillant performances and SLB had
> > > excellent
> > > > choices for each role. whether it was srk's mom or aish's mom
> > > (Kiron
> > > > Kher's song is also good) they all excelled.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Comparisons:
> > > >
> > > > Everyone of my friends (who haven't seen the flick) have asked
> > > > whether it was better than k3g. well Devdas doesn't have kajol,
> > so
> > > > that's a big flaw imo. K3g was totally different but I saw that
> > > three
> > > > times in the theater ALONE before I actually viewed it on DVD!!
> > > > Devdas however, though it has repeat value, I don't know if I
> > could
> > > > see it three times in the theater...but I am going to c it
> again
> > at
> > > > 5:30 because I have to see it w/my family and close friends.
> But
> > > this
> > > > time, I know what to expect so maybe I will like it better.
> > > >
> > > > Maduri vs. Aish. Well I honestly think that SLB has some sort
> of
> > > > fixation on Aish, because in all the earlier versions never has
> > > Paro
> > > > been given so much importance. I mean she has more footage then
> > > > anyone imo. Oh and when I mean 'fixation' i don't mean the kind
> > > that
> > > > the perverted M. F. Hussain has w/madhuri LOL. But just some
> sort
> > > of
> > > > closeness i guess ;0) So in comparison, madhuri did her best ;)
> > And
> > > > if those rumors about madhuri having problems w/SLB were true,
> > then
> > > I
> > > > could see why...Because althought madhuri was there, she wasn't
> > > > always present...does this make sense??
> > > >
> > > > Neway I LOVED madhuri so I am looking forward to seeing this
> > flick
> > > > again, just for her alone and the songs picturizations...!!
> > > >
> > > > Songs:
> > > >
> > > > The awards will def. be given in this category, from
> choregraphy
> > to
> > > > the lyrics, everything were superb. The best songs were Kaahe
> > Ched
> > > > Mohe, Mardalla and Dola re Dola...actually all the songs were
> > > great.
> > > > even Silsila Yeh..., especially the way Aish hold the diya in
> her
> > > > hand....WOW..!! oh and the pic. of Bairi Piya was rather cute...
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > The Movie-Overall:
> > > >
> > > > I would give it a 8/10. The sets, the choregraphy, the
> > > > confrontations, everything were done w/great detail etc. But
> the
> > > most
> > > > important feature of a film is the story and screenplay, which
> is
> > > > where this flick fell short IMHO...oh and I cried in the
> > > ending...it
> > > > was so sad...so be prepared ahead of time...!!!
> > > >
> > > > Please feel free too comment or ask any questions guys...!!
> > > > I'll look forward to the replies and try to respond to all of
> > them
> > > > too... =)
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Love
> > > > Minu
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > P.S. Pakeeza, Eda, Zara, if u guys read this, I still have to
> > reply
> > > > to ur old posts that u sent me, I haven't forgotten and I
> promise
> > > to
> > > > reply to them asap. right now i have to go and see the movie
> > > > again :0)
> > > >
> > > > P.S.S. Shahnaz, have u recieved my mail?? Let me know :0)
> > > >
> > > > WELCOME TO ALL NEW MEMBERS..!

Hey Sarahhhhhh,

Good to know u r still around........
i'm ok,really really bored though.
actually i wanted to see Devdas real bad,but can't cause here aren't
that many indians so they only have like 5 shows of it and all at
night,only over 2 days,not worth the trouble,i think i'll just wait
for the tape.
  what else?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
talk to ya soon,
Lin.

-- In kajolworld@y..., "profiler1980_2000" <profiler1980_2000@y...>
wrote:
> hey Lin ,
>
> Iam around yaar , just have no time to post or reply , Thanks for
> asking :o):o)
>
> How about ya ?? how is everything ?? are you planning to watch
Devdas
> soon ??!1
>
>
>
> Take Care
> Sarah

Sarah!

Hi, haven't seen you at the club for quite some time... Good to have
you back.
I'm happy to know you're enjoying my story. I'll post more soon.

*shahnaz*


--- In kajolworld@y..., "profiler1980_2000" <profiler1980_2000@y...>
wrote:
> well, i just wanted to tell ya that I just had the chance to
complete
> reading your stories , they are awesome , I liked them :o):o) keep
> the great work up and post more  :O):O)
>
>
>
>
> Take Care
> Sarah

Hmmm, these are some of the scenes that kept lingering in my head...

1. When Paro meets her new family... Especially her step son in law,
where he purposely grabbed her feet, then she pulled his ear... Man,
if I was in her shoes, I'd do the same thing.

2. Morey Piya and the confrontation that came later. Wow, how did
Aish manage to balance that 'thing' on her head, while having
Shahrukh teasing her like that?

3. When Devdas asked the Panditji to perform his own funeral... I got
tears in my eyes when I saw that one.

4. Kaahe Ched and Maar Daala... Do I have to say more??? :)

5. Madhuri's scene w/srk when she asks if she will ever see him
again...knowing what the actual anwser to this really is....Yep, that
was really good. And when he finally said her name "Chandramukhi..."
Wow, Madhuri's face says it all... Damn, they were really good!

Like you said Minu, we can just go on...

*shahnaz*


--- In kajolworld@y..., "fan_of_kajol" <minu_174@h...> wrote:
> Hi Qandeel yaar,
> well glad that u liked the...review...!! nehoo just thought I would
> be quick on this one (but i will give more detail scene
descriptions
> once more ppl have seen teh movie) and tell u the scenes that stood
> out in my mind, regardless of whom was in them:
>
> here goes, btw these are SPOILERS..!! So don't read if u don't want
> to know...
>
> Madhuri's confrontation scene w/ash. not a sweet scene but really
> well performed by both of them. Madhuri excells w/her excellent
> dialouge dilvery.
>
> Madhuri's scene w/srk when she asks if she will ever see him
> again...knowing what the actual anwser to this really is....
>
> srk's scenes w/ash, all of them basically. No cliched lines, just
> pure words of poetry, truly superb. (especially in the song Bairi
> Piya and even in Morey Piya). oh and when srk sees ash lying down
and
> he goes over to her (he's just returned from london) and touches
her
> face, lips etc. very cute(ly) done =)
>
> what else...Kiron Kher (who plays srk's mother) when she is told by
> ash's mom that devdas and paro can not marry and she breaks
down...it
> was really sad.
>
> The ending...with ash yelling DEVDA...DEVDA....and her husband
> watching her run towards the gate/door to see Devdas...
>
> when srk first picks up a liquor bottle...my god, his eyes say it
> all. It's like he doesn't want to drink...but doesn't know what
else
> to do with out his paro.
>
> Paro pleading w/devdas to run away w/her before her parents get her
> married and devdas refusing her request.
>
> I could go on...let me know, i don't want to bore u..!!!
>
> love
> minu
>
> p.s. i love ur story...have i mentioned this in the past??! Well
here
> it is again, keep it up..!!
>
> p.s.s. the surprise packet for me was Kiron Kher's
performance...all
> her scenes will make u cry, yell, cheer...she's an amazing actress.
>
>
> --- In kajolworld@y..., "kiran50274" <kiran50274@y...> wrote:
> > HI Minu,
> > i'm so glad that u posted up this review because most people who
> have
> > wathced it arn't posting up such detailed reviews becuase they
> dont'
> > wanna spoil it so i wanna thanku for taking the time to write it.
i
> > know what u mean about slb and ash. she's liek a teachers pet
kind
> of
> > like to him. lol. well i havn't seen the movie yet and tell me
some
> > more of the highlights of the movie please.
> > what are the cutest scenes?
> > Qandeel
> >
> > --- In kajolworld@y..., "fan_of_kajol" <minu_174@h...> wrote:
> > > Hiya guys,
> > > I haven't been around for a while, so I figured before
> > I 'offically'
> > > come back I should give a little post about what I thought
about
> > the
> > > movie =) There's really NO SPOILERS But still be careful, just
in
> > > case you don't want to know ANYTHING before u see it.
> > >
> > > First things first, I thought that the movie was greeeaaat =)
But
> > not
> > > the best I've seen =( Maybe because I had sky high expectations
> but
> > I
> > > had high expectations for k3g too...Let's just say that if
Devdas
> > the
> > > movie becomes a Legend...I will be happy, but if it doesn't
then
> I
> > > will understand.
> > >
> > > Now, before I make any comparisons or whatever, I just want
> anybody
> > > (who's gonna read this) to know that I haven't read any reviews
> > this
> > > far, not any from the this club(I've been busy...ugh!) or even
> any
> > > reviews from the komal's and taran's of the world LOL, so I
don't
> > > know what anybody but me, my friend and peeps in the theater
w/me
> > > thought about it...
> > >
> > > The Performances:
> > >
> > > SRK- He was really good. I heard ppl that were sitting beside
my
> > guy
> > > friend [who i went with ;) ] that they thought he was
overacting
> in
> > a
> > > few scenes...well i didn't think this, in fact I think he
> overacted
> > > in k3g (maybe thanks to karan LOL) sometimes, but not in
devdas.
> > Was
> > > he better than Dilip Saab?? Well, i saw the older Bimal Roy
> verison
> > > before so I can compare. But to be honest, they are too totally
> > > different ppl from seprarte generations protraying their own
> > version
> > > of the man named Devdas Mukerjee...so comparisons are hard to
> make
> > =)
> > >
> > > The only thing that I thought was that I do think that OTHER
> peeps
> > > (very few though) could have played Devdas, but it would have
> > turned
> > > out totally different obviously...But would I have wanted to c
> > > ANOTHER man play Devdas...NOOO!!
> > >
> > >
> > > Aish- Well, I don't like...just thought I would get that out
> there,
> > > so this maybe biased, but to be honest, she was
just......superb
> =)
> > > There were a few scenes that she tended to 'stiffen' in, but
> > overall
> > > one of her better performances...She had the most time to
> showcase
> > > her talent, so maybe that's why...
> > >
> > > Madhuri- I can't say enough...from her dances, to her facial
> > > expressions...they were mindblowing!!!! In fact I am only going
> to
> > c
> > > the flick again because of her...!!!! She was just great, I
can't
> > say
> > > enough.
> > >
> > > Jackie- He tended to overact a bit, according to me, but I
guess
> > his
> > > part was the only comic relief (especially in the second half)
> that
> > > the viewer noticed, so it's understandable.
> > >
> > > Supporting Cast- Were all brillant performances and SLB had
> > excellent
> > > choices for each role. whether it was srk's mom or aish's mom
> > (Kiron
> > > Kher's song is also good) they all excelled.
> > >
> > >
> > > Comparisons:
> > >
> > > Everyone of my friends (who haven't seen the flick) have asked
> > > whether it was better than k3g. well Devdas doesn't have kajol,
> so
> > > that's a big flaw imo. K3g was totally different but I saw that
> > three
> > > times in the theater ALONE before I actually viewed it on DVD!!
> > > Devdas however, though it has repeat value, I don't know if I
> could
> > > see it three times in the theater...but I am going to c it
again
> at
> > > 5:30 because I have to see it w/my family and close friends.
But
> > this
> > > time, I know what to expect so maybe I will like it better.
> > >
> > > Maduri vs. Aish. Well I honestly think that SLB has some sort
of
> > > fixation on Aish, because in all the earlier versions never has
> > Paro
> > > been given so much importance. I mean she has more footage then
> > > anyone imo. Oh and when I mean 'fixation' i don't mean the kind
> > that
> > > the perverted M. F. Hussain has w/madhuri LOL. But just some
sort
> > of
> > > closeness i guess ;0) So in comparison, madhuri did her best ;)
> And
> > > if those rumors about madhuri having problems w/SLB were true,
> then
> > I
> > > could see why...Because althought madhuri was there, she wasn't
> > > always present...does this make sense??
> > >
> > > Neway I LOVED madhuri so I am looking forward to seeing this
> flick
> > > again, just for her alone and the songs picturizations...!!
> > >
> > > Songs:
> > >
> > > The awards will def. be given in this category, from
choregraphy
> to
> > > the lyrics, everything were superb. The best songs were Kaahe
> Ched
> > > Mohe, Mardalla and Dola re Dola...actually all the songs were
> > great.
> > > even Silsila Yeh..., especially the way Aish hold the diya in
her
> > > hand....WOW..!! oh and the pic. of Bairi Piya was rather cute...
> > >
> > >
> > > The Movie-Overall:
> > >
> > > I would give it a 8/10. The sets, the choregraphy, the
> > > confrontations, everything were done w/great detail etc. But
the
> > most
> > > important feature of a film is the story and screenplay, which
is
> > > where this flick fell short IMHO...oh and I cried in the
> > ending...it
> > > was so sad...so be prepared ahead of time...!!!
> > >
> > > Please feel free too comment or ask any questions guys...!!
> > > I'll look forward to the replies and try to respond to all of
> them
> > > too... =)
> > >
> > >
> > > Love
> > > Minu
> > >
> > >
> > > P.S. Pakeeza, Eda, Zara, if u guys read this, I still have to
> reply
> > > to ur old posts that u sent me, I haven't forgotten and I
promise
> > to
> > > reply to them asap. right now i have to go and see the movie
> > > again :0)
> > >
> > > P.S.S. Shahnaz, have u recieved my mail?? Let me know :0)
> > >
> > > WELCOME TO ALL NEW MEMBERS..!!

Sana,

It means , "Actually, I prefer Kajol."

*shahnaz*


--- sangelkw <no_reply@yahoogroups.com> wrote:
> guys :
> i hope you dont mind , but i read your messages, and
> pleaswe can you
> tell me what is the meaning of this :
> (("Actually, saya lebih suka Kajol!"))
> thank you .
> dont mind ha :)
>
> --- In kajolworld@y..., krezy_j <no_reply@y...>
> wrote:
> > Shahnaz.....hahahahaaa!!!! syabas to your friend
> Azra...please give
> > her a high 5 for me...i think i too would have
> said the same thing.
> I
> > have to see the interview on TV, again when is
> it???? "..Saya lebih
> > suka Kajol!""" ah that is hilarious! actually i
> too do not quite
> like
> > aishwarya, i feel that she anbd like kareena
> kapoor just want to be
> > with srk, but i have to see the movie first to see
> how they paired
> > together. reading what you have wrote...sounds
> like it was better
> > thatn kkkg??? Hope to hear a reply from you, Jenn
> >
> >
> > --- In kajolworld@y..., *shahnaz*
> <brown_eyes2201@y...> wrote:
> > > eda...
> > >
> > > Aww, that's bad... But eda, tolong la tgk the
> > > interviews, aight? :) Check out my friend,
> Azra...
> > > When the interviewer asked her opinion on
> Aishwarya
> > > Rai, she said.."Actually, saya lebih suka
> Kajol!"
> > > Hahahahhaa.. You should see the interviewer's
> face...
> > >
> > > *shahnaz*
> > >
> > >
> > > --- miss_eda2001 <miss_eda2001@y...> wrote:
> > > > OMG shahnaz......u watched it, plz plz tell us
> more
> > > > abt it..!! i will
> > > > not able to watch it until the vcd is out 4
> sale (i
> > > > think they will
> > > > not show devdas in kelantan)poor of me :O(
> > > >
> > > > eda
> > > > p/s: wow u will be in salaam bollywood and now
> > > > showing!! i will watch
> > > > both of it!!
> > > >
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HI guys,
Firstly I want to thanks to jenn, mahreen, eda, sana, pakeeza, aisha,
tusi, ruqs and anyone else who has read or complimented my story. You
guys are so nice. Now about your stories they are so awesome. Aisha-
the way the purposing went was so cute but y did that stupid phone
have to ring at that time. I wish that rahul smashes it instead of
picking it up. And I love the comedy even though it was crazy. Lol.
Mahreen- the library scene was so emotional and sad. I hope nisha
sees that anand doesn't love her really. Great job with the
dialogues. Tusi- its so mean the way priya keeps on bringing akash up
making poor rahul sad. When is she gonna realise rahul's feelings.
Well I can't wait to see what there next plan is to make aakash
jealous. Lol. All u other story writers which includes: shahnaz,
pakeeza, neha, sush, nayahai, rani, please keep posting your story.
(sorry if I missed anyone). And thanku sarah, I just saw your post
and I'm glad u like my story.
Here is my part hope u like it.

AT THE AIRPORT IN AMERICA
Sapna looks around for her aunt Amrita who was supposed to pick her
up today. It had been a long journey for Sapna. The ride to here
seemed too long. She was already in a bad mood and now her auntie was
going to ruin it more by being late. She looked around and spots her
aunt Nargis waving to her. A smile spreads across Sapna's face.
"Oh auntie I missed u so much," she said hugging her.
"I missed u too sweetie" Her aunt looked like a doll in a white
sparkly sari.
"Auntie u look so nice,"
"alloo ji, mein agai kabi buri lagi hoon (do I ever look bad?)" joked
aunt nargis.
They both laughed. "Aunti, Khushboo and Auntie Amrita didn't come?"
she asked as they headed to their car.
"Sapna u know your aunt right? She has been at the beauty parlor all
day long and then she realized she was getting late so she called me
to pick u up."
Sapna rolled her eyes. "So what else is new?" she said being
sarcastic.
"Hey is it that bad to have me pick u up," asked her aunt.
"Aunti! U know its always nice to see u!"

AT KHUSHBOO'S HOUSE
Sapna and her aunt reached the house before khushboo and her mom. But
as soon as they did get home it was as if they had never
gone. "KHUSHBOO!!" the girls hugged and started chatting. All day
long the house was a chatter box with people dropping in to say hi.
Or Sapna and Khushboo's conversation: "o I like your nails!," "what
have u done with your hair," " I like your outfit!".
Or Sapna and aunt amrita's conversation: "o how is your dad?"
or "when is he coming over?"

THREE DAYS LATER
There were all these kids at her aunts house that Sapna didn't even
know! They were all relatives of her dad who wasn't even there. So
instead Sapna had to put up with them. It wasn't a bad thing though,
she was actually really enjoying it. This was the first time in her
life that she was around so many people. Usually it was just her dad
and her but now she was getting the nice feeling of being around a
bigger family. Like today they had all decided to go out and play
cricket in the lawn.
Tommy, her 5 yr. Old cousin, was up first. Khushboo was pitching. She
threw the ball softly. The boy flung the bat and instead of hitting
the ball he went in circles. Everyone started laughing. "Hey I'm
telling my mommy on u!!" he said and stomped inside the house. "Hey
game to hatam kar jao (hey finish the game atleast)" yelled Cindy in
after him but he was too angry to listen. Next up was Robbie. He was
a boy much older, like 11. He hit the ball and it flew right across
the lawn and into aunt amrita's tea cup that she was having  with
nargis. Nargis started laughing but then tried to stop it after
seeing the look on amrita's face.
After that it was Sapna's turn. She was a bit nervous for she wasn't
at all good at cricket. Her hands started getting sweaty and she kind
of got butterflies in her stomach. She was really surprised at this
for she didn't think she would get nervous over such a little thing.
But it wasn't how far she hit her ball that worried her, it was
something else. Something she couldn't figure out. Khushboo pitched
and Sapna hit it. It was a fly ball and she was sure no one was going
to catch it. But someone did catch it and it wasn't any of the kids.
It wasn't Khushboo either. It was Rohan.

please respond guys. i love reading them. thanku

QANDEEL

well, i just wanted to tell ya that I just had the chance to complete
reading your stories , they are awesome , I liked them :o):o) keep
the great work up and post more  :O):O)




Take Care
Sarah

HI RANI!
That was AWSOME!! u know your story is probably the only one that
makes me question myself soem of the things that i dont understand
and then u solve them at the end of each part by using really nice
words. see that really proves what a wonderful writer u are! liek in
this part, i didn't come to figure out that the guy was acting as
bhavi's dad. that part made me question "y is his dad being so nice"
adn then i was like oo its just someone else. lol. i'm serious thats
exactly how real story books are. am i making u blush again? lol. i'm
sorry if i am, i really mean all of this.

Qandeel

--- In kajolworld@y..., rageshvari <no_reply@y...> wrote:
> The courthouse loomed ahead. She surreptitiously checked her
rearview
> mirror, and this time she could not beat down her worry. An ancient
> and rusted brown Maruti was still behind her. Feeling the blood
drain
> from her face, Bhavi restrained herself from turning in her seat
and
> finding out who her follower was. That would fully compromise her
own
> identity.
> There was only one explanation. Mr. Kaante had trumped her
deception –
>  he had never been asleep.
> Nothing could be done about that now, Bhavi knew. He could try and
> follow her, but he couldn't stop her. Clutching the purse with the
> necessary paperwork inside, Bhavi waited in her car. Bleakly, she
saw
> the Maruti park nearby. Nothing could be gained from hiding.
Putting
> up her chin, she decided to get out of her car. From the corner of
> her eye, she saw that a large man emerged from the Maruti.
> He was not Mr. Kaante.
> Before the sigh of relief could come, the world tilted as she
> realized that her father must have hired more than one bodyguard.
> More likely, he had hired an army of them. Well, if she had drugged
> one of them, maybe she could try hand-to-hand combat with this one.
> Discarding that last thought, she steadily walked towards the
> courthouse steps. No need to show fear. Poise, outward poise, she
> repeated to herself.
> "Suniye…(Hello)?" A man's voice called out to her.
> She stopped mid-stride, and without thinking, started running. The
> man's voice rose higher behind her, but she didn't dare turn around.
>  His eyes widened as he caught his first sight of her. With the sun
> blazing in his eyes, she could very well have been a mirage. A
> trembling mirage, he suddenly realized, as he saw her start to run.
> He struggled to call her name, but the word stuck in his throat.
No,
> the word Bhairavi stuck somewhere in the proximity of his ribs.
> She stopped running as soon as her frantic gaze caught him standing
> at the very top of the steps that lined the front of the antiquated
> courthouse. Very easily, every thought meandered out of her head,
> replaced by a simple awareness. Steadying one shivering hand to
catch
> hold of her sari, she began to climb towards him.
> Was she floating? Surely, her feet were not touching the stone
steps?
> The first step towards her was taken almost without Avirat's
> knowledge. When I see you, he wanted to whisper, I become a
rambling
> poet. All these images and phrases form in my head. They're
> beautiful, so divine and pure. But nothing ever slips out. A poet
> without words.  You make me that.
> Bhavi climbed the stairs as he descended to meet her, and they met
in
> the middle.
> It was when she stood directly beside him, that Avirat knew the
very
> words he wanted to say to her.
>  "Be my…" He lost himself, drowning in the eyes that spoke
> their own language, feeling himself weak, as if he would fall to
his
> knees.
>  "What?" she whispered, a half-formed expectation awakening
> itself inside of her.
>  They stood too close to each other on that narrow step,
> feeling, yet not understanding. Only when reality snapped its
fingers
> did they each have the presence of mind to step away from one
> another.
>  "Be my guest," he softly, almost sadly told her, gallantly
> extending his arm to lead the way.
>  Bhavi wanted to stop him, to ask, but she quieted the impulse
> and followed him to a room that contained three others: Chutki,
> Babuji and the judge. With the arrival of Avirat and Bhavi, the
party
> was only missing her father.
>  It was then that the burly man stormed through the half-open
> doors of the courtroom. The instant Bhavi caught sight of his face,
> she knew what was about to happen. Feeling her cheeks reddening,
she
> took wobbly steps forward and stopped the owner of the Maruti.
>             "I-I can explain…Mr. Kaa – "
>             "Oh, don't worry about it! I practiced all my lines
three
> times!"
>             The grin he was wearing could hardly be seen under his
> very large, very bushy mustache. Stepping past Bhavi, he approached
> the younger woman standing beside Avirat, and announced, "Lo beti
> mein aa gaya! Aur ye Avirat hoga, na? Kya hatta khatta naujawan hai…
> mujhe to bahut pasand aa gaya! Ab chal, Avirat aur teri shaadi kar
> de. (Look daughter, I have come! And this here must be Avirat,
right?
> What a strong, young man he looks to be…I like him very much! Now
> come, let's get you and Avirat married)"
>  "Kya (What)!?" a flabbergasted Chutki almost screamed.
>             "Kyu beti? Kya tumhe vishvaas nahin ho raha hai ki
mujhe
> Avirat ko apna jamaai banaane mein koi itraaz nahin hai…? (Why,
> daughter? Can you not believe that I am willing to make Avirat my
son-
> in-law?)"
>             "Vishvaas (Believe)?" Chutki miserably voiced, eying
her
> brother, "Vishvaas mujhe nahin, Babuji ko karna hai…(It's not me
who
> has to believe, but Babuji…)"
>             Before Chutki could finish, and mostly to cover up her
> words, Avirat spoke up,  "Sir, let introduce you to my Babuji, and
> this here is my `sister', Chutki."
>             "Kya (What)?" the shocked man stammered, repeating the
> same reaction Chutki had earlier displayed. "Tumhaari behan hai ye
to…
> (If this is your sister, then…)" he muttered, swiveling to see the
> other young woman in the room.
>             "Bhavari!" He shouted as a greeting, striding towards a
> queasy looking Bhavi and putting his arm around her.
>             At this, a stunned Bhavi could only shoot a decidedly
> scared look to Avirat.
>             "Bhavari?" Babuji finally interjected, "Beti
(Daughter),
> I thought your name was Bhairavi."
>             "Pet name! It's, um, her pet name," Avirat nearly
> shouted, his desperation evident.
>             "Bhairavi!" the other man loudly repeated, focusing his
> gaze on Bhavi as he frantically added, "Mujhe lagta hai ki tum
Avirat
> ke saath bahut khush rahogi. Dekho kitna chalaak ladka hai…(I think
> you will be very happy with Avirat. Look what a clever young man he
> is…)"
>             Bhavi, struggling under the weight of the heavy man's
> arm, had by now figured out the game. She shot an exasperated look
> towards Avirat. "Chalaak ya badmaash…? (Clever or devilish?)" she
> mumbled to herself.
>             A stony silence followed this, as everyone waited for
> Babuji to see through the whole charade. But, they say marriages
are
> made somewhere beyond the clouds. And this one, false or true, was
> definitely a pre-decided one.
>             The next time Bhavi saw the stone steps where she had
> stood just an hour ago, she was a married woman. New names were now
> attached to her person. Bahu, bhabhi aur biwi*. (Wife, Sister-in-
Law,
> Daughter-in-Law). She squirmed when she thought about the
hollowness
> of it all.
>  "Beti…meri beti…(Daughter, my daughter…)" her assumed father
> affectionately cried, his arm around her, as Bhavi realized that
she
> would even have to pretend suffering.
>  "Father," Bhavi returned brokenly, taking in the full impact
> of her guilt and feeling the tears coming easily.
>  Avirat put his hand on her shoulder, and she could feel his
> remorse, tangibly. Then, leaning over her, he whispered something
> quickly to her "father", something that sounded like, "Ten o'clock."
>             With the removal of her "father" from the party, the
> Bharadwajs' led her to the borrowed car they had come in. Drowning
in
> self-mortification, she quietly went through all the traditions
> required of a newly-wedded wife entering her husband's house. It
was
> nearly nine by the time they finished all the welcoming and sat
down
> to an awkward dinner. Afterwards, Bhavi flushed even deeper when
> Babuji slyly pointed them towards Avirat's bedroom, waiting till
they
> had closed the door behind them.
>  Stretched garlands of jasmine and roses had been hung over
> and around the bed. Both Avirat and Bhavi eyed it and tried not to
> show their embarrassment. Each decided to be rational, but when
they
> abruptly turned towards each other, Bhavi's arm brushed past
Avirat's
> chest. And stunning electricity charged between them.
>             "I, uh, need…" Bhavi began, quite forgetting the rest
of
> her sentence.
>            "Need…" He said lingeringly.
>            She opened her mouth, but just then, they heard a
> shuffling sound outside the bedroom door. Avirat, instinctively
> clamped his hand on Bhavi's mouth, stopping her from making any
> noise. Instead of becoming anxious, or even attuned to the noise,
> Bhavi felt the warmth of his hand on her face. The scent of jasmine
> stole into her and instead of pulling his hand away, she found
> herself swaying closer to him.
>  If it wasn't for the toll of the grandfather clock, well, she
> didn't want to think about what could have happened. The chimes
> penetrated the haze that they had drifted into, and each pulled
back.
>  "Leave," Avirat murmured, finishing her former sentence, "You
> need to get back."
>  Some sensible portion of her brain agreed to his suggestion,
> as she watched him listen at the door for further noises. When
there
> was none, he stalked towards the windows and threw them open.
>  To leave, they would have to get down two stories. Bhavi let
> out a pent up breath, as she raked a hand through her hair and
> considered Avirat with incredulity.
>            "I'm not a rock climber and neither am I stupid," She
> finally told him, "What do you plan to do?"
>            "You mean out of those two choices?" Avirat shot back at
> her with a lazy grin, "Take the stupid way, but do it smartly."
>           "Oh yeah, I married the chaalak ladka (clever boy)
right?"
> Bhavi retorted with a playful grin, referring to what her pretend
> father had announced at the courthouse.
>  He smiled up at her, and without thought let his fingers move
> lightly over her curved lips. The touch rendered Bhavi immobile.
>  "We, ah, we better get started. We don't have much time,"
> Avirat hesitantly explained, pulling a coil of rope from under the
> bed.
>  Without further explanation, he pulled the rope around her
> waist and tied it firmly in a knot. They other end, he tied and
> wrapped around his arm. They tested the strength of the knot, and
> then Avirat leaned out the window and gave three sharp knocks
against
> the side of it. A few moments later, they heard three identical
> knocks from below.
>  About a hundred questions formed in Bhavi's mind. Before she
> could voice them, Avirat put a finger on her lips to quiet her.
With
> resolute determination, he spoke.
>  "I know that life has acquainted us in the strangest way,
> then put us in circumstances we could have never imagined. It's
true
> that we hardly know each other, so separated are our situations.
But,
> I want you to know that I would never hurt you. I will keep you
safe,
> Bhavi. Do you trust my promise?"
>  She returned his gaze, her face illuminated by moonlight.
> Barely managing to nod, she placed her hand in his proffered hand
and
> watched him lay it against his heart.
>  Avirat did not know how long they stood there, but perhaps a
> few minutes later, he was explaining the method of Bhavi's trip
down
> the side of his building. He would be holding on to the ropes that
> would let her down. And she would be using the balcony railings on
> either side of the window to steady herself. At the bottom, the
actor
> from the courthouse would be waiting for her.
>  Bhavi climbed over the window with his help, gazing at the
> concentration on Avirat's face. He held the rope fiercely. And she
> was again reassured that he would keep her safe. At the bottom, the
> actor caught her and untied her ropes.
> How would Avirat get down? Before she could stammer a question, she
> saw Avirat agilely use the railings to make his way down. He didn't
> even need a rope.
>  "He's done this before, hasn't he?" She voiced, a question
> more for herself.
>  "With Avirat's reputation – well, he must be an expert on
> climbing in an out of windows!" The burly man answered with a
> chuckle, and then looked frightfully uneasy as if he had said
> something he should not have.
>  Bhavi turned to ask him what he meant, but was stopped by
> Avirat's soft landing beside her. With quick and noiseless steps,
> they went around the old building and headed for the car that
> Avirat's friend had brought with him.
>  With sincere gratitude, Bhavi shook the man's hand. He, in
> turn, placed his hand on her head, and gave her his blessings.
>  "Munnabhai…" Avirat began, and the two men grinned and
> clapped each other on the back.
>  With that, Avirat and Bhavi got in the car and speeded
> through the empty roads towards her house. In the car, their
> conversation concerned their future stratagems. Avirat explained
that
> she would have to return for Bahu bhoj (Meal cooked by Bride) in
the
> morning. Afterwards, Munnabhai would call Babuji and explain that
> Bhavi's dying aunt's last wish was for niece to stay with her.
>  "That way, Babuji won't suspect why you're not living with
> me."
>  With us, Avirat meant to say. Living with us. He could see
> her ashen face, and cursed himself for being its cause. The car
> stopped by the stone fence near the back of the house. Avirat got
> out, effortlessly lifting Bhavi over the fence. She didn't say a
word
> through all this, remaining distantly thoughtful. He climbed over
the
> fence to join her.
>  "I think, we've given Babuji plenty to suspect, but he plain
> doesn't want to," Bhavi began, her voice so low he could barely
hear
> her, "The courthouse sham. The-the night before when you announced
> that my father was out of town and then five minutes later
pretended
> that he was waiting at home for me…Babuji is closing his eyes to it
> all."
>  "It was a sham, wasn't it?" Avirat murmured, as they stood
> just outside the orchard behind her house.
>  She knew that he wasn't referring to Munnabhai's comic
> confusion at the courthouse. He was referring to the document that
> they had both so mindlessly signed.
>  "On paper," she whispered, then embarrassedly continued, "I-I
> better go. Goodnight, Avirat."
>  He stared at her for another long moment. "Bhavi, I think it
> would be better that we don't confuse what's on paper with what's
> real. That kind of confusion wouldn't help either of us."
>  Without saying another word (why did he never say goodbye?)
> he turned on his heel, leaving her standing staring after him. She
> heard the soft jingle of the Porsche's keys in his hand as he
> resolutely jumped over the fence and disappeared. His manner, she
> realized, seemed altogether indifferent. The orchard loomed on one
> side of her, and within it danced the memories of a different
night,
> not so long ago.

no offense neha, but u r being mean......u told us days before that u
r working on ur next part and u have no idea what u r putting me
thru...i have been crazily waiting for ur story!!!
plllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeee give me a date so that i
can manage to wait until then......whatever u wanna do....just do
it...ok? i am so sorry if it offends u but ur story is seriously not
to wait for!!!
post soon
luv
mehreen
--- In kajolworld@y..., "srknkajol4evr" <Ahen717@a...> wrote:
> hi everyone...
> i am working on the next part of my story...there isnt much left to
> it, so u can kind of guess wats going to happen soon.
> however, im really excited about this other idea i have...its
> practically the opposite of the one im writing now but actually its
> also really similar...i hope u guys wont mind...lol anywaaaaaaaays
> its coming soon, but thanx everyone for waiting.
> as for everyone who keeps posting...thanx so much guys...u guys r
> awesome and so r ur stories!!!!!! everyone is doing great...and btw
> welcome sush! ur story is excellent...keep posting!!! =)
> love
> neha

hey guys, sorry for that but i have to admit that i am not at all
excited about devdas.......i know i'm being stupid and biased but i
just can't help my feelings......komal's review of ashwariya's
performance where she says no actress could have played it better(i
don't remember the exact words but it was something like that)just
freaked me out.....i am unbelievably pathetic......but i could never
ever imagine shahrukh with any other actress specially in a romantic
role......no matter how brilliant the director is(as sanjay is one of
my favorites) or how good the movie is......sorry for this but i had
to express it!!!
sorry again
mehreen

that was great rani.....i love the subtle mode of your story.....it
touches my heart.....i could never describe their relationship.....no
romance till now....but the way u have kept us wanting more of ur
story is brilliant...seriously i can't wait till u post the next
part!!!
please have mercy on us
bye for now
luv
mehreen
--- In kajolworld@y..., rageshvari <no_reply@y...> wrote:
> The courthouse loomed ahead. She surreptitiously checked her
rearview
> mirror, and this time she could not beat down her worry. An ancient
> and rusted brown Maruti was still behind her. Feeling the blood
drain
> from her face, Bhavi restrained herself from turning in her seat
and
> finding out who her follower was. That would fully compromise her
own
> identity.
> There was only one explanation. Mr. Kaante had trumped her
deception –
>  he had never been asleep.
> Nothing could be done about that now, Bhavi knew. He could try and
> follow her, but he couldn't stop her. Clutching the purse with the
> necessary paperwork inside, Bhavi waited in her car. Bleakly, she
saw
> the Maruti park nearby. Nothing could be gained from hiding.
Putting
> up her chin, she decided to get out of her car. From the corner of
> her eye, she saw that a large man emerged from the Maruti.
> He was not Mr. Kaante.
> Before the sigh of relief could come, the world tilted as she
> realized that her father must have hired more than one bodyguard.
> More likely, he had hired an army of them. Well, if she had drugged
> one of them, maybe she could try hand-to-hand combat with this one.
> Discarding that last thought, she steadily walked towards the
> courthouse steps. No need to show fear. Poise, outward poise, she
> repeated to herself.
> "Suniye…(Hello)?" A man's voice called out to her.
> She stopped mid-stride, and without thinking, started running. The
> man's voice rose higher behind her, but she didn't dare turn around.
>  His eyes widened as he caught his first sight of her. With the sun
> blazing in his eyes, she could very well have been a mirage. A
> trembling mirage, he suddenly realized, as he saw her start to run.
> He struggled to call her name, but the word stuck in his throat.
No,
> the word Bhairavi stuck somewhere in the proximity of his ribs.
> She stopped running as soon as her frantic gaze caught him standing
> at the very top of the steps that lined the front of the antiquated
> courthouse. Very easily, every thought meandered out of her head,
> replaced by a simple awareness. Steadying one shivering hand to
catch
> hold of her sari, she began to climb towards him.
> Was she floating? Surely, her feet were not touching the stone
steps?
> The first step towards her was taken almost without Avirat's
> knowledge. When I see you, he wanted to whisper, I become a
rambling
> poet. All these images and phrases form in my head. They're
> beautiful, so divine and pure. But nothing ever slips out. A poet
> without words.  You make me that.
> Bhavi climbed the stairs as he descended to meet her, and they met
in
> the middle.
> It was when she stood directly beside him, that Avirat knew the
very
> words he wanted to say to her.
>  "Be my…" He lost himself, drowning in the eyes that spoke
> their own language, feeling himself weak, as if he would fall to
his
> knees.
>  "What?" she whispered, a half-formed expectation awakening
> itself inside of her.
>  They stood too close to each other on that narrow step,
> feeling, yet not understanding. Only when reality snapped its
fingers
> did they each have the presence of mind to step away from one
> another.
>  "Be my guest," he softly, almost sadly told her, gallantly
> extending his arm to lead the way.
>  Bhavi wanted to stop him, to ask, but she quieted the impulse
> and followed him to a room that contained three others: Chutki,
> Babuji and the judge. With the arrival of Avirat and Bhavi, the
party
> was only missing her father.
>  It was then that the burly man stormed through the half-open
> doors of the courtroom. The instant Bhavi caught sight of his face,
> she knew what was about to happen. Feeling her cheeks reddening,
she
> took wobbly steps forward and stopped the owner of the Maruti.
>             "I-I can explain…Mr. Kaa – "
>             "Oh, don't worry about it! I practiced all my lines
three
> times!"
>             The grin he was wearing could hardly be seen under his
> very large, very bushy mustache. Stepping past Bhavi, he approached
> the younger woman standing beside Avirat, and announced, "Lo beti
> mein aa gaya! Aur ye Avirat hoga, na? Kya hatta khatta naujawan hai…
> mujhe to bahut pasand aa gaya! Ab chal, Avirat aur teri shaadi kar
> de. (Look daughter, I have come! And this here must be Avirat,
right?
> What a strong, young man he looks to be…I like him very much! Now
> come, let's get you and Avirat married)"
>  "Kya (What)!?" a flabbergasted Chutki almost screamed.
>             "Kyu beti? Kya tumhe vishvaas nahin ho raha hai ki
mujhe
> Avirat ko apna jamaai banaane mein koi itraaz nahin hai…? (Why,
> daughter? Can you not believe that I am willing to make Avirat my
son-
> in-law?)"
>             "Vishvaas (Believe)?" Chutki miserably voiced, eying
her
> brother, "Vishvaas mujhe nahin, Babuji ko karna hai…(It's not me
who
> has to believe, but Babuji…)"
>             Before Chutki could finish, and mostly to cover up her
> words, Avirat spoke up,  "Sir, let introduce you to my Babuji, and
> this here is my `sister', Chutki."
>             "Kya (What)?" the shocked man stammered, repeating the
> same reaction Chutki had earlier displayed. "Tumhaari behan hai ye
to…
> (If this is your sister, then…)" he muttered, swiveling to see the
> other young woman in the room.
>             "Bhavari!" He shouted as a greeting, striding towards a
> queasy looking Bhavi and putting his arm around her.
>             At this, a stunned Bhavi could only shoot a decidedly
> scared look to Avirat.
>             "Bhavari?" Babuji finally interjected, "Beti
(Daughter),
> I thought your name was Bhairavi."
>             "Pet name! It's, um, her pet name," Avirat nearly
> shouted, his desperation evident.
>             "Bhairavi!" the other man loudly repeated, focusing his
> gaze on Bhavi as he frantically added, "Mujhe lagta hai ki tum
Avirat
> ke saath bahut khush rahogi. Dekho kitna chalaak ladka hai…(I think
> you will be very happy with Avirat. Look what a clever young man he
> is…)"
>             Bhavi, struggling under the weight of the heavy man's
> arm, had by now figured out the game. She shot an exasperated look
> towards Avirat. "Chalaak ya badmaash…? (Clever or devilish?)" she
> mumbled to herself.
>             A stony silence followed this, as everyone waited for
> Babuji to see through the whole charade. But, they say marriages
are
> made somewhere beyond the clouds. And this one, false or true, was
> definitely a pre-decided one.
>             The next time Bhavi saw the stone steps where she had
> stood just an hour ago, she was a married woman. New names were now
> attached to her person. Bahu, bhabhi aur biwi*. (Wife, Sister-in-
Law,
> Daughter-in-Law). She squirmed when she thought about the
hollowness
> of it all.
>  "Beti…meri beti…(Daughter, my daughter…)" her assumed father
> affectionately cried, his arm around her, as Bhavi realized that
she
> would even have to pretend suffering.
>  "Father," Bhavi returned brokenly, taking in the full impact
> of her guilt and feeling the tears coming easily.
>  Avirat put his hand on her shoulder, and she could feel his
> remorse, tangibly. Then, leaning over her, he whispered something
> quickly to her "father", something that sounded like, "Ten o'clock."
>             With the removal of her "father" from the party, the
> Bharadwajs' led her to the borrowed car they had come in. Drowning
in
> self-mortification, she quietly went through all the traditions
> required of a newly-wedded wife entering her husband's house. It
was
> nearly nine by the time they finished all the welcoming and sat
down
> to an awkward dinner. Afterwards, Bhavi flushed even deeper when
> Babuji slyly pointed them towards Avirat's bedroom, waiting till
they
> had closed the door behind them.
>  Stretched garlands of jasmine and roses had been hung over
> and around the bed. Both Avirat and Bhavi eyed it and tried not to
> show their embarrassment. Each decided to be rational, but when
they
> abruptly turned towards each other, Bhavi's arm brushed past
Avirat's
> chest. And stunning electricity charged between them.
>             "I, uh, need…" Bhavi began, quite forgetting the rest
of
> her sentence.
>            "Need…" He said lingeringly.
>            She opened her mouth, but just then, they heard a
> shuffling sound outside the bedroom door. Avirat, instinctively
> clamped his hand on Bhavi's mouth, stopping her from making any
> noise. Instead of becoming anxious, or even attuned to the noise,
> Bhavi felt the warmth of his hand on her face. The scent of jasmine
> stole into her and instead of pulling his hand away, she found
> herself swaying closer to him.
>  If it wasn't for the toll of the grandfather clock, well, she
> didn't want to think about what could have happened. The chimes
> penetrated the haze that they had drifted into, and each pulled
back.
>  "Leave," Avirat murmured, finishing her former sentence, "You
> need to get back."
>  Some sensible portion of her brain agreed to his suggestion,
> as she watched him listen at the door for further noises. When
there
> was none, he stalked towards the windows and threw them open.
>  To leave, they would have to get down two stories. Bhavi let
> out a pent up breath, as she raked a hand through her hair and
> considered Avirat with incredulity.
>            "I'm not a rock climber and neither am I stupid," She
> finally told him, "What do you plan to do?"
>            "You mean out of those two choices?" Avirat shot back at
> her with a lazy grin, "Take the stupid way, but do it smartly."
>           "Oh yeah, I married the chaalak ladka (clever boy)
right?"
> Bhavi retorted with a playful grin, referring to what her pretend
> father had announced at the courthouse.
>  He smiled up at her, and without thought let his fingers move
> lightly over her curved lips. The touch rendered Bhavi immobile.
>  "We, ah, we better get started. We don't have much time,"
> Avirat hesitantly explained, pulling a coil of rope from under the
> bed.
>  Without further explanation, he pulled the rope around her
> waist and tied it firmly in a knot. They other end, he tied and
> wrapped around his arm. They tested the strength of the knot, and
> then Avirat leaned out the window and gave three sharp knocks
against
> the side of it. A few moments later, they heard three identical
> knocks from below.
>  About a hundred questions formed in Bhavi's mind. Before she
> could voice them, Avirat put a finger on her lips to quiet her.
With
> resolute determination, he spoke.
>  "I know that life has acquainted us in the strangest way,
> then put us in circumstances we could have never imagined. It's
true
> that we hardly know each other, so separated are our situations.
But,
> I want you to know that I would never hurt you. I will keep you
safe,
> Bhavi. Do you trust my promise?"
>  She returned his gaze, her face illuminated by moonlight.
> Barely managing to nod, she placed her hand in his proffered hand
and
> watched him lay it against his heart.
>  Avirat did not know how long they stood there, but perhaps a
> few minutes later, he was explaining the method of Bhavi's trip
down
> the side of his building. He would be holding on to the ropes that
> would let her down. And she would be using the balcony railings on
> either side of the window to steady herself. At the bottom, the
actor
> from the courthouse would be waiting for her.
>  Bhavi climbed over the window with his help, gazing at the
> concentration on Avirat's face. He held the rope fiercely. And she
> was again reassured that he would keep her safe. At the bottom, the
> actor caught her and untied her ropes.
> How would Avirat get down? Before she could stammer a question, she
> saw Avirat agilely use the railings to make his way down. He didn't
> even need a rope.
>  "He's done this before, hasn't he?" She voiced, a question
> more for herself.
>  "With Avirat's reputation – well, he must be an expert on
> climbing in an out of windows!" The burly man answered with a
> chuckle, and then looked frightfully uneasy as if he had said
> something he should not have.
>  Bhavi turned to ask him what he meant, but was stopped by
> Avirat's soft landing beside her. With quick and noiseless steps,
> they went around the old building and headed for the car that
> Avirat's friend had brought with him.
>  With sincere gratitude, Bhavi shook the man's hand. He, in
> turn, placed his hand on her head, and gave her his blessings.
>  "Munnabhai…" Avirat began, and the two men grinned and
> clapped each other on the back.
>  With that, Avirat and Bhavi got in the car and speeded
> through the empty roads towards her house. In the car, their
> conversation concerned their future stratagems. Avirat explained
that
> she would have to return for Bahu bhoj (Meal cooked by Bride) in
the
> morning. Afterwards, Munnabhai would call Babuji and explain that
> Bhavi's dying aunt's last wish was for niece to stay with her.
>  "That way, Babuji won't suspect why you're not living with
> me."
>  With us, Avirat meant to say. Living with us. He could see
> her ashen face, and cursed himself for being its cause. The car
> stopped by the stone fence near the back of the house. Avirat got
> out, effortlessly lifting Bhavi over the fence. She didn't say a
word
> through all this, remaining distantly thoughtful. He climbed over
the
> fence to join her.
>  "I think, we've given Babuji plenty to suspect, but he plain
> doesn't want to," Bhavi began, her voice so low he could barely
hear
> her, "The courthouse sham. The-the night before when you announced
> that my father was out of town and then five minutes later
pretended
> that he was waiting at home for me…Babuji is closing his eyes to it
> all."
>  "It was a sham, wasn't it?" Avirat murmured, as they stood
> just outside the orchard behind her house.
>  She knew that he wasn't referring to Munnabhai's comic
> confusion at the courthouse. He was referring to the document that
> they had both so mindlessly signed.
>  "On paper," she whispered, then embarrassedly continued, "I-I
> better go. Goodnight, Avirat."
>  He stared at her for another long moment. "Bhavi, I think it
> would be better that we don't confuse what's on paper with what's
> real. That kind of confusion wouldn't help either of us."
>  Without saying another word (why did he never say goodbye?)
> he turned on his heel, leaving her standing staring after him. She
> heard the soft jingle of the Porsche's keys in his hand as he
> resolutely jumped over the fence and disappeared. His manner, she
> realized, seemed altogether indifferent. The orchard loomed on one
> side of her, and within it danced the memories of a different
night,
> not so long ago.

what right do u have to torture us like this........oh my gosh, that
stupid phone had to ring at that magical moment.........whoever that
was.......i totally hate that person..........i have no words for ur
romantic description!!!! for one thing, it was natural......unlike
typical hindi movies......where everything is just perfect for a
romantic night.....the ring-not-fitting part was fabulous!!! i loved
how shalini managed the situation......i agree with rahul
100%.....she sure is brilliant.....correction u sure r brilliant!!!
once again u have......oh i don't know what have u done to me!!!
post the next part asap
bye
luv
mehreen
--- In kajolworld@y..., "saiqaahmad" <saiqaahmad@y...> wrote:
> hey guys!  well, i have to say that when i posted part 25 up of my
> story i noticed that no one else was posting and i was reallly
> disappointed but now.....there are new parts up everyday and i am
> ecstatic!  first of all, tusi...did u have to stop there huh?  did
> you have to leave me hanging!  how could you! now until and unless
> you post up your next parts(notice the plural), our speaking
> conditions are disconnected!!!(sorry, i tend to get worked up
> hehehe).....secondly, shahnaz:  did you have to stop there?  did u
> have to leave me hanging? lol, just kidding...yaar, i love your
story
> sooooo much!  it is unbelievable...the relationship pooja and
sameer
> have is so unlikely....and i cant wait for it to evolve into
> something more......you better post!  Rani:  why are you postin up
> old parts!!!! please, if you were at my house right now you would
see
> me begging on my hands and knees for you to post up new parts!
> please...i cannot wait any longer!!  Qandeell!!!  wheres is "hum
tere
> dewanee hain"!!!!  i wanna see what happens when sameer goes to
> america!! please let him get back his sapna!  pakeeza: you deserve
an
> individual message..and i am posting one so please read it...you'll
> understand once you read it ok?  and last(but never ever least),
> mehreen:  dont stop!!! i want to know what her answer is!!!  how
can
> you put me through this torture...how can you make me suffer!!!  i
> seriously cant believe raj...why is he forcing his beloved to make
a
> decision...he should understand that this is a complicated point in
> nisha's life....look at me i'm rambling on and on like they are a
> real couple!!  anyways...please please please post more up as soon
as
> possible....oh yeah and i forgot, zara:  NO ONE IS GOING TO DIE
MAN!!
> lol.....well...heres the next part...hope you guys enjoy it!
>
> Part 28
> __________________________
>
>         In the car, Rahul could hardly contain himself....he wanted
> to get to the house as soon as possible, time was playing games
with
> him....whenever he wanted time to pass by, it would go by slower
then
> the word, "slow" and when he wanted to savor the moments, the time
> would pass by like a speeding bullet.  finally they reached the
> building.
>        "hey sameer, why dont you come up for some coffee", asked
> shalini.
>     priya and rahul began swishing their heads from side to side,
> attempting sameer to decline the offer but you know sameer.
>       "hey guys, do u have neck cramps or something?  anyway, yeah
> sure i'll come up for some coffee".
>          as they were walking up to rahuls apartment, priya elbowed
> sameer in the stomach.
>      "you idiot!", she whispered, "rahul is going to propose!!!  we
> had to leave the two alone".
>       "oh damn it, i forgot.....am i the biggest dummy in the world
> or what......i know, i'll make an excuse", whispered back
> sameer, "hey shalini, i just remembered, uhhh....ummm.....my turtle
> has a fracture in his leg, and i....ii.....well, i have to take him
> to the vet.....yeah, thats right, i have to take my turtle, pukey,
to
> the vet".
>         priya was flabergasted.
>      "you have to take your turtle to the vet at 9:00 at night",
> asked shalini. "and he has a fractured leg?"
>      "you named your turtle......pukey?", asked rahul.
>      "yeah, you know...turtles are green....puke is gr----".
>       "ok ok ok ok, please...no details!  uhh, sameer, forget it,
you
> are not going anywhere", said priya, pulling him by the arm.
>        "but i thought-"
>        "no 'buts'", priya responded.
>    right when this, slightly disturbing conversation was over, they
> reached the room.......as they entered, shalini went straight into
> the kitchen to turn the kettle on.
>      "both of you..get out of here now', urged rahul.
>      "i told him to", said priya, "but then he said he would make
up
> an excuse......you have a turtle?", she asked sameer.
>       "not the last time i checked,"replied sameer.
>      " i dont care about the turtle...guys please!!  for one second
> let me think....uhh...why dont you go to sameers apartment for a
> little while...please....this is the moment of my life, and i dont
> want it to be spoiled.....".
>      Priya nodded and the two sped away before shalini could get
out
> of the kitchen.  when she did exit, she began to ask questions from
> rahul, who was sitting on the couch.
>        "hey, where did those two go:, she asked holding 4 mugs in a
> tray.
>        "uh, they just stepped out for a minute....dont worry,
they'll
> be back soon....uhh, sweetie, why dont you come over here, and sit
> for a while."
>        shalini, who's initial reaction was an expression of
> confusion, went over to where rahul was sitting, put the tray down
> and sat down beside him.  shalini put her hand on his shoulder and
> asked what was wrong.
>        "you look tense", she said.
>      Rahul who relized he was sweating from head to toe
replied, "no,
> no i'm ok".
>        "you want me to get you some cold water.......or maybe i
could
> whip up some....."
>      Rahul put his finger on her lips...."no, i dont need
> anything...i'm ok........is that how much you care for me"?
>       "what do u mean", shalini asked, completely dazed.
>       "if i suddenly lost my job, and my fortune collapsed, would
you
> still love me"?
>        "rahul!  what kind of question is this!  of course i would,
my
> love for you is unconditional".
>        Rahul looked at her and smiled.  "For richer or poorer".
>         "huh", was shalinis reaction.  Rahul began to slightly
laugh
> and then he held her hand in his.
>       "if i fell sick, would you care and nurture me back to my
full
> recovery"?
>          "Rahul!  what has gotten into you!  of course i would
> sweetie", she said while holding his face with her hands.
>         Rahul once again smiled and said, "In sickness or in
health".
>         Shalini must have begun to catch on, because she looked at
> him, first in confoundment and then, she gave him a shy smile.
>        "promise me now.....that you would love me eternally...that
> you would always be mine".
>      now shalini had no words to express her feelings...she just
> looked at him, tears welling up in her eyes, and slightly nodded
her
> head.
>       Rahul now bent down on one knee, still holding her hand and
> this time he said, "Till Death Shall we part".
>        "oh my god", were the words that shalini just managed to
spill
> out.
>      "shalini", rahul began, "after the heartbreak i went through
> after priya left me, i thought i would never love again....and then
> you came along.....i thought of you to be the life-saver that i was
> always hoping for....praying for.......the time that we spent
togther
> was the most joyous i've ever had and i'll always cherish
it.....for
> daysi thought about asking you a question...".  at this point,
> shalini began to tremble with excitement....she was anticipating
this
> moment for her whole life....
>       " shalini, i thought about it and i actually doubted myself
for
> quite a while.....could i provide for you everything you would
> need.....could i fulfill the duties of a husband.....would this
> relationship between us last forever?  i thought and thought but
the
> answers you gave me right now to my questions.....they cleared up
> every dark cloud in my mind".  now rahul reached inside his jacket
> and took out the small velvet jewllers box....
>         "you told me, the first day that we met that you adored the
> ocean.....it gave me the impression of you being very emotional and
> spiritual....i thought, so that i could make you happier then any
> other man could on this planet, i would customise a ring especially
> for you........".  now he took the ring out of the box and when
> shalini saw it, she gasped with amazement.
>       "oh my god, rahul......you must have spent a fortune on this".
>        "you like it"?
>        "are you kidding me, i love it......rahul...are these
supposed
> to be dolphins?"
>       "uhh...yeah".
>         shalini's eyes once again began to fill with tears as she
> flung herself into rahuls arms.  rahul began to grin madly and
then,
> once again they got into their initial positions.  rahul took the
> ring and began sliding it onto her finger...halfway through, it got
> stuck.....it was a tiny bit too small.
>       "shit", rahul said gruffly.  shalini began to giggle a tiny
bit
> but then seeing the exasperation on rahuls face, she stopped.
>       "it's ok honey".
>        "no no its not......today was supposed to be perfect", he
said.
>     shalini didnt want to disappoint the love of her life so she
> thought like crazy about what could be done....and then finally,
> using the brilliant brain that she had, she came up with an idea.
>      "i know what to do", she said.  she remembered that her father
> had gifted her with a - delicate silver chain before he died, that
> she would always wear for good luck......she took it off and then
> took the ring out of rahuls hand.  rahul looked at shalini with
> amazement.
>      "you are brilliant".  he took the ring, which was whitegold so
> it matched amazingly with the chain and slipped it into the chain.
> then he delicately put it around shalinis neck.  he began stroking
> her face with his fingers gently and then came the time that he
would
> pop that magical, life-changing question.
>       "shalini singh, my love, ........will you mar-"
>    BBRRRIIINNNGG, went the phone.

The courthouse loomed ahead. She surreptitiously checked her rearview
mirror, and this time she could not beat down her worry. An ancient
and rusted brown Maruti was still behind her. Feeling the blood drain
from her face, Bhavi restrained herself from turning in her seat and
finding out who her follower was. That would fully compromise her own
identity.
There was only one explanation. Mr. Kaante had trumped her deception –
  he had never been asleep.
Nothing could be done about that now, Bhavi knew. He could try and
follow her, but he couldn't stop her. Clutching the purse with the
necessary paperwork inside, Bhavi waited in her car. Bleakly, she saw
the Maruti park nearby. Nothing could be gained from hiding. Putting
up her chin, she decided to get out of her car. From the corner of
her eye, she saw that a large man emerged from the Maruti.
He was not Mr. Kaante.
Before the sigh of relief could come, the world tilted as she
realized that her father must have hired more than one bodyguard.
More likely, he had hired an army of them. Well, if she had drugged
one of them, maybe she could try hand-to-hand combat with this one.
Discarding that last thought, she steadily walked towards the
courthouse steps. No need to show fear. Poise, outward poise, she
repeated to herself.
"Suniye…(Hello)?" A man's voice called out to her.
She stopped mid-stride, and without thinking, started running. The
man's voice rose higher behind her, but she didn't dare turn around.
  His eyes widened as he caught his first sight of her. With the sun
blazing in his eyes, she could very well have been a mirage. A
trembling mirage, he suddenly realized, as he saw her start to run.
He struggled to call her name, but the word stuck in his throat. No,
the word Bhairavi stuck somewhere in the proximity of his ribs.
She stopped running as soon as her frantic gaze caught him standing
at the very top of the steps that lined the front of the antiquated
courthouse. Very easily, every thought meandered out of her head,
replaced by a simple awareness. Steadying one shivering hand to catch
hold of her sari, she began to climb towards him.
Was she floating? Surely, her feet were not touching the stone steps?
The first step towards her was taken almost without Avirat's
knowledge. When I see you, he wanted to whisper, I become a rambling
poet. All these images and phrases form in my head. They're
beautiful, so divine and pure. But nothing ever slips out. A poet
without words.  You make me that.
Bhavi climbed the stairs as he descended to meet her, and they met in
the middle.
It was when she stood directly beside him, that Avirat knew the very
words he wanted to say to her.
	 "Be my…" He lost himself, drowning in the eyes that spoke
their own language, feeling himself weak, as if he would fall to his
knees.
	 "What?" she whispered, a half-formed expectation awakening
itself inside of her.
	 They stood too close to each other on that narrow step,
feeling, yet not understanding. Only when reality snapped its fingers
did they each have the presence of mind to step away from one
another.
	 "Be my guest," he softly, almost sadly told her, gallantly
extending his arm to lead the way.
	 Bhavi wanted to stop him, to ask, but she quieted the impulse
and followed him to a room that contained three others: Chutki,
Babuji and the judge. With the arrival of Avirat and Bhavi, the party
was only missing her father.
	 It was then that the burly man stormed through the half-open
doors of the courtroom. The instant Bhavi caught sight of his face,
she knew what was about to happen. Feeling her cheeks reddening, she
took wobbly steps forward and stopped the owner of the Maruti.
             "I-I can explain…Mr. Kaa – "
             "Oh, don't worry about it! I practiced all my lines three
times!"
             The grin he was wearing could hardly be seen under his
very large, very bushy mustache. Stepping past Bhavi, he approached
the younger woman standing beside Avirat, and announced, "Lo beti
mein aa gaya! Aur ye Avirat hoga, na? Kya hatta khatta naujawan hai…
mujhe to bahut pasand aa gaya! Ab chal, Avirat aur teri shaadi kar
de. (Look daughter, I have come! And this here must be Avirat, right?
What a strong, young man he looks to be…I like him very much! Now
come, let's get you and Avirat married)"
	 "Kya (What)!?" a flabbergasted Chutki almost screamed.
             "Kyu beti? Kya tumhe vishvaas nahin ho raha hai ki mujhe
Avirat ko apna jamaai banaane mein koi itraaz nahin hai…? (Why,
daughter? Can you not believe that I am willing to make Avirat my son-
in-law?)"
             "Vishvaas (Believe)?" Chutki miserably voiced, eying her
brother, "Vishvaas mujhe nahin, Babuji ko karna hai…(It's not me who
has to believe, but Babuji…)"
             Before Chutki could finish, and mostly to cover up her
words, Avirat spoke up,  "Sir, let introduce you to my Babuji, and
this here is my `sister', Chutki."
             "Kya (What)?" the shocked man stammered, repeating the
same reaction Chutki had earlier displayed. "Tumhaari behan hai ye to…
(If this is your sister, then…)" he muttered, swiveling to see the
other young woman in the room.
             "Bhavari!" He shouted as a greeting, striding towards a
queasy looking Bhavi and putting his arm around her.
             At this, a stunned Bhavi could only shoot a decidedly
scared look to Avirat.
             "Bhavari?" Babuji finally interjected, "Beti (Daughter),
I thought your name was Bhairavi."
             "Pet name! It's, um, her pet name," Avirat nearly
shouted, his desperation evident.
             "Bhairavi!" the other man loudly repeated, focusing his
gaze on Bhavi as he frantically added, "Mujhe lagta hai ki tum Avirat
ke saath bahut khush rahogi. Dekho kitna chalaak ladka hai…(I think
you will be very happy with Avirat. Look what a clever young man he
is…)"
             Bhavi, struggling under the weight of the heavy man's
arm, had by now figured out the game. She shot an exasperated look
towards Avirat. "Chalaak ya badmaash…? (Clever or devilish?)" she
mumbled to herself.
             A stony silence followed this, as everyone waited for
Babuji to see through the whole charade. But, they say marriages are
made somewhere beyond the clouds. And this one, false or true, was
definitely a pre-decided one.
             The next time Bhavi saw the stone steps where she had
stood just an hour ago, she was a married woman. New names were now
attached to her person. Bahu, bhabhi aur biwi*. (Wife, Sister-in-Law,
Daughter-in-Law). She squirmed when she thought about the hollowness
of it all.
	 "Beti…meri beti…(Daughter, my daughter…)" her assumed father
affectionately cried, his arm around her, as Bhavi realized that she
would even have to pretend suffering.
	 "Father," Bhavi returned brokenly, taking in the full impact
of her guilt and feeling the tears coming easily.
	 Avirat put his hand on her shoulder, and she could feel his
remorse, tangibly. Then, leaning over her, he whispered something
quickly to her "father", something that sounded like, "Ten o'clock."
             With the removal of her "father" from the party, the
Bharadwajs' led her to the borrowed car they had come in. Drowning in
self-mortification, she quietly went through all the traditions
required of a newly-wedded wife entering her husband's house. It was
nearly nine by the time they finished all the welcoming and sat down
to an awkward dinner. Afterwards, Bhavi flushed even deeper when
Babuji slyly pointed them towards Avirat's bedroom, waiting till they
had closed the door behind them.
	 Stretched garlands of jasmine and roses had been hung over
and around the bed. Both Avirat and Bhavi eyed it and tried not to
show their embarrassment. Each decided to be rational, but when they
abruptly turned towards each other, Bhavi's arm brushed past Avirat's
chest. And stunning electricity charged between them.
             "I, uh, need…" Bhavi began, quite forgetting the rest of
her sentence.
            "Need…" He said lingeringly.
            She opened her mouth, but just then, they heard a
shuffling sound outside the bedroom door. Avirat, instinctively
clamped his hand on Bhavi's mouth, stopping her from making any
noise. Instead of becoming anxious, or even attuned to the noise,
Bhavi felt the warmth of his hand on her face. The scent of jasmine
stole into her and instead of pulling his hand away, she found
herself swaying closer to him.
	 If it wasn't for the toll of the grandfather clock, well, she
didn't want to think about what could have happened. The chimes
penetrated the haze that they had drifted into, and each pulled back.
	 "Leave," Avirat murmured, finishing her former sentence, "You
need to get back."
	 Some sensible portion of her brain agreed to his suggestion,
as she watched him listen at the door for further noises. When there
was none, he stalked towards the windows and threw them open.
	 To leave, they would have to get down two stories. Bhavi let
out a pent up breath, as she raked a hand through her hair and
considered Avirat with incredulity.
            "I'm not a rock climber and neither am I stupid," She
finally told him, "What do you plan to do?"
            "You mean out of those two choices?" Avirat shot back at
her with a lazy grin, "Take the stupid way, but do it smartly."
           "Oh yeah, I married the chaalak ladka (clever boy) right?"
Bhavi retorted with a playful grin, referring to what her pretend
father had announced at the courthouse.
	 He smiled up at her, and without thought let his fingers move
lightly over her curved lips. The touch rendered Bhavi immobile.
	 "We, ah, we better get started. We don't have much time,"
Avirat hesitantly explained, pulling a coil of rope from under the
bed.
	 Without further explanation, he pulled the rope around her
waist and tied it firmly in a knot. They other end, he tied and
wrapped around his arm. They tested the strength of the knot, and
then Avirat leaned out the window and gave three sharp knocks against
the side of it. A few moments later, they heard three identical
knocks from below.
	 About a hundred questions formed in Bhavi's mind. Before she
could voice them, Avirat put a finger on her lips to quiet her. With
resolute determination, he spoke.
	 "I know that life has acquainted us in the strangest way,
then put us in circumstances we could have never imagined. It's true
that we hardly know each other, so separated are our situations. But,
I want you to know that I would never hurt you. I will keep you safe,
Bhavi. Do you trust my promise?"
	 She returned his gaze, her face illuminated by moonlight.
Barely managing to nod, she placed her hand in his proffered hand and
watched him lay it against his heart.
	 Avirat did not know how long they stood there, but perhaps a
few minutes later, he was explaining the method of Bhavi's trip down
the side of his building. He would be holding on to the ropes that
would let her down. And she would be using the balcony railings on
either side of the window to steady herself. At the bottom, the actor
from the courthouse would be waiting for her.
	 Bhavi climbed over the window with his help, gazing at the
concentration on Avirat's face. He held the rope fiercely. And she
was again reassured that he would keep her safe. At the bottom, the
actor caught her and untied her ropes.
How would Avirat get down? Before she could stammer a question, she
saw Avirat agilely use the railings to make his way down. He didn't
even need a rope.
	 "He's done this before, hasn't he?" She voiced, a question
more for herself.
	 "With Avirat's reputation – well, he must be an expert on
climbing in an out of windows!" The burly man answered with a
chuckle, and then looked frightfully uneasy as if he had said
something he should not have.
	 Bhavi turned to ask him what he meant, but was stopped by
Avirat's soft landing beside her. With quick and noiseless steps,
they went around the old building and headed for the car that
Avirat's friend had brought with him.
	 With sincere gratitude, Bhavi shook the man's hand. He, in
turn, placed his hand on her head, and gave her his blessings.
	 "Munnabhai…" Avirat began, and the two men grinned and
clapped each other on the back.
	 With that, Avirat and Bhavi got in the car and speeded
through the empty roads towards her house. In the car, their
conversation concerned their future stratagems. Avirat explained that
she would have to return for Bahu bhoj (Meal cooked by Bride) in the
morning. Afterwards, Munnabhai would call Babuji and explain that
Bhavi's dying aunt's last wish was for niece to stay with her.
	 "That way, Babuji won't suspect why you're not living with
me."
	 With us, Avirat meant to say. Living with us. He could see
her ashen face, and cursed himself for being its cause. The car
stopped by the stone fence near the back of the house. Avirat got
out, effortlessly lifting Bhavi over the fence. She didn't say a word
through all this, remaining distantly thoughtful. He climbed over the
fence to join her.
	 "I think, we've given Babuji plenty to suspect, but he plain
doesn't want to," Bhavi began, her voice so low he could barely hear
her, "The courthouse sham. The-the night before when you announced
that my father was out of town and then five minutes later pretended
that he was waiting at home for me…Babuji is closing his eyes to it
all."
	 "It was a sham, wasn't it?" Avirat murmured, as they stood
just outside the orchard behind her house.
	 She knew that he wasn't referring to Munnabhai's comic
confusion at the courthouse. He was referring to the document that
they had both so mindlessly signed.
	 "On paper," she whispered, then embarrassedly continued, "I-I
better go. Goodnight, Avirat."
	 He stared at her for another long moment. "Bhavi, I think it
would be better that we don't confuse what's on paper with what's
real. That kind of confusion wouldn't help either of us."
	 Without saying another word (why did he never say goodbye?)
he turned on his heel, leaving her standing staring after him. She
heard the soft jingle of the Porsche's keys in his hand as he
resolutely jumped over the fence and disappeared. His manner, she
realized, seemed altogether indifferent. The orchard loomed on one
side of her, and within it danced the memories of a different night,
not so long ago.