Qandeell..oh no..rohan was there!!hope Sameer will tell her that he
luv her...plzz post the rest asap!!

eda



--- In kajolworld@y..., "kiran50274" <kiran50274@y...> wrote:
> HI guys,
> Firstly I want to thanks to jenn, mahreen, eda, sana, pakeeza,
aisha,
> tusi, ruqs and anyone else who has read or complimented my story.
You
> guys are so nice. Now about your stories they are so awesome. Aisha-

> the way the purposing went was so cute but y did that stupid phone
> have to ring at that time. I wish that rahul smashes it instead of
> picking it up. And I love the comedy even though it was crazy. Lol.
> Mahreen- the library scene was so emotional and sad. I hope nisha
> sees that anand doesn't love her really. Great job with the
> dialogues. Tusi- its so mean the way priya keeps on bringing akash
up
> making poor rahul sad. When is she gonna realise rahul's feelings.
> Well I can't wait to see what there next plan is to make aakash
> jealous. Lol. All u other story writers which includes: shahnaz,
> pakeeza, neha, sush, nayahai, rani, please keep posting your story.
> (sorry if I missed anyone). And thanku sarah, I just saw your post
> and I'm glad u like my story.
> Here is my part hope u like it.
>
> AT THE AIRPORT IN AMERICA
> Sapna looks around for her aunt Amrita who was supposed to pick her
> up today. It had been a long journey for Sapna. The ride to here
> seemed too long. She was already in a bad mood and now her auntie
was
> going to ruin it more by being late. She looked around and spots
her
> aunt Nargis waving to her. A smile spreads across Sapna's face.
> "Oh auntie I missed u so much," she said hugging her.
> "I missed u too sweetie" Her aunt looked like a doll in a white
> sparkly sari.
> "Auntie u look so nice,"
> "alloo ji, mein agai kabi buri lagi hoon (do I ever look bad?)"
joked
> aunt nargis.
> They both laughed. "Aunti, Khushboo and Auntie Amrita didn't come?"
> she asked as they headed to their car.
> "Sapna u know your aunt right? She has been at the beauty parlor
all
> day long and then she realized she was getting late so she called
me
> to pick u up."
> Sapna rolled her eyes. "So what else is new?" she said being
> sarcastic.
> "Hey is it that bad to have me pick u up," asked her aunt.
> "Aunti! U know its always nice to see u!"
>
> AT KHUSHBOO'S HOUSE
> Sapna and her aunt reached the house before khushboo and her mom.
But
> as soon as they did get home it was as if they had never
> gone. "KHUSHBOO!!" the girls hugged and started chatting. All day
> long the house was a chatter box with people dropping in to say hi.
> Or Sapna and Khushboo's conversation: "o I like your nails!," "what
> have u done with your hair," " I like your outfit!".
> Or Sapna and aunt amrita's conversation: "o how is your dad?"
> or "when is he coming over?"
>
> THREE DAYS LATER
> There were all these kids at her aunts house that Sapna didn't even
> know! They were all relatives of her dad who wasn't even there. So
> instead Sapna had to put up with them. It wasn't a bad thing
though,
> she was actually really enjoying it. This was the first time in her
> life that she was around so many people. Usually it was just her
dad
> and her but now she was getting the nice feeling of being around a
> bigger family. Like today they had all decided to go out and play
> cricket in the lawn.
> Tommy, her 5 yr. Old cousin, was up first. Khushboo was pitching.
She
> threw the ball softly. The boy flung the bat and instead of hitting
> the ball he went in circles. Everyone started laughing. "Hey I'm
> telling my mommy on u!!" he said and stomped inside the house. "Hey
> game to hatam kar jao (hey finish the game atleast)" yelled Cindy
in
> after him but he was too angry to listen. Next up was Robbie. He
was
> a boy much older, like 11. He hit the ball and it flew right across
> the lawn and into aunt amrita's tea cup that she was having with
> nargis. Nargis started laughing but then tried to stop it after
> seeing the look on amrita's face.
> After that it was Sapna's turn. She was a bit nervous for she
wasn't
> at all good at cricket. Her hands started getting sweaty and she
kind
> of got butterflies in her stomach. She was really surprised at this
> for she didn't think she would get nervous over such a little
thing.
> But it wasn't how far she hit her ball that worried her, it was
> something else. Something she couldn't figure out. Khushboo pitched
> and Sapna hit it. It was a fly ball and she was sure no one was
going
> to catch it. But someone did catch it and it wasn't any of the
kids.
> It wasn't Khushboo either. It was Rohan.
>
> please respond guys. i love reading them. thanku
>
> QANDEEL