HI guys,
Firstly I want to thanks to jenn, mahreen, eda, sana, pakeeza, aisha,
tusi, ruqs and anyone else who has read or complimented my story. You
guys are so nice. Now about your stories they are so awesome. Aisha-
the way the purposing went was so cute but y did that stupid phone
have to ring at that time. I wish that rahul smashes it instead of
picking it up. And I love the comedy even though it was crazy. Lol.
Mahreen- the library scene was so emotional and sad. I hope nisha
sees that anand doesn't love her really. Great job with the
dialogues. Tusi- its so mean the way priya keeps on bringing akash up
making poor rahul sad. When is she gonna realise rahul's feelings.
Well I can't wait to see what there next plan is to make aakash
jealous. Lol. All u other story writers which includes: shahnaz,
pakeeza, neha, sush, nayahai, rani, please keep posting your story.
(sorry if I missed anyone). And thanku sarah, I just saw your post
and I'm glad u like my story.
Here is my part hope u like it.

AT THE AIRPORT IN AMERICA
Sapna looks around for her aunt Amrita who was supposed to pick her
up today. It had been a long journey for Sapna. The ride to here
seemed too long. She was already in a bad mood and now her auntie was
going to ruin it more by being late. She looked around and spots her
aunt Nargis waving to her. A smile spreads across Sapna's face.
"Oh auntie I missed u so much," she said hugging her.
"I missed u too sweetie" Her aunt looked like a doll in a white
sparkly sari.
"Auntie u look so nice,"
"alloo ji, mein agai kabi buri lagi hoon (do I ever look bad?)" joked
aunt nargis.
They both laughed. "Aunti, Khushboo and Auntie Amrita didn't come?"
she asked as they headed to their car.
"Sapna u know your aunt right? She has been at the beauty parlor all
day long and then she realized she was getting late so she called me
to pick u up."
Sapna rolled her eyes. "So what else is new?" she said being
sarcastic.
"Hey is it that bad to have me pick u up," asked her aunt.
"Aunti! U know its always nice to see u!"

AT KHUSHBOO'S HOUSE
Sapna and her aunt reached the house before khushboo and her mom. But
as soon as they did get home it was as if they had never
gone. "KHUSHBOO!!" the girls hugged and started chatting. All day
long the house was a chatter box with people dropping in to say hi.
Or Sapna and Khushboo's conversation: "o I like your nails!," "what
have u done with your hair," " I like your outfit!".
Or Sapna and aunt amrita's conversation: "o how is your dad?"
or "when is he coming over?"

THREE DAYS LATER
There were all these kids at her aunts house that Sapna didn't even
know! They were all relatives of her dad who wasn't even there. So
instead Sapna had to put up with them. It wasn't a bad thing though,
she was actually really enjoying it. This was the first time in her
life that she was around so many people. Usually it was just her dad
and her but now she was getting the nice feeling of being around a
bigger family. Like today they had all decided to go out and play
cricket in the lawn.
Tommy, her 5 yr. Old cousin, was up first. Khushboo was pitching. She
threw the ball softly. The boy flung the bat and instead of hitting
the ball he went in circles. Everyone started laughing. "Hey I'm
telling my mommy on u!!" he said and stomped inside the house. "Hey
game to hatam kar jao (hey finish the game atleast)" yelled Cindy in
after him but he was too angry to listen. Next up was Robbie. He was
a boy much older, like 11. He hit the ball and it flew right across
the lawn and into aunt amrita's tea cup that she was having with
nargis. Nargis started laughing but then tried to stop it after
seeing the look on amrita's face.
After that it was Sapna's turn. She was a bit nervous for she wasn't
at all good at cricket. Her hands started getting sweaty and she kind
of got butterflies in her stomach. She was really surprised at this
for she didn't think she would get nervous over such a little thing.
But it wasn't how far she hit her ball that worried her, it was
something else. Something she couldn't figure out. Khushboo pitched
and Sapna hit it. It was a fly ball and she was sure no one was going
to catch it. But someone did catch it and it wasn't any of the kids.
It wasn't Khushboo either. It was Rohan.

please respond guys. i love reading them. thanku

QANDEEL