Hi Dave,
First before I forget I found this great site on some script writing rules
Saves a lot of reading scripts to see how it's done.
Very crazy what is going on over there. I definitely like the idea of folding back. Often one has to find fame in another country before homeland recognizes that person. Good luck with that.
The damage over there is insane. I would be scared to death to be in that area. It might even get worse as time passes and conditions worsen. More people will resort to violence, murders in the street, scary stuff.
I do not think his part in all this is mere coincidence. Corruption and trouble seem to follow that man!
I definitely think you could make your story more main stream by sensationalizing parts of it, and minimizing some of the side details and such. Make it more of an intriguing mystery that elusively escapes him even in the end. It wouldn't be very hard at all, at least I don't think so. By making it more of a fictional dramatization of actual events I think it would also help lessen some of the danger especially if all of the names were changed and such.
Let me know how it goes, and always God bless you and your family in this time of need.
Sara
december14be <pr136498@...> wrote:
december14be <pr136498@...> wrote:
Sara ,
Check this I posted on the other groups . Explains a lot about all
my difficulies , including the film script .
Busy prolific period , with many exchanges with French people coming
for week ends to get awy from the turmoil in France .
The unease and riots are spreading to Belgium ...
It brings a certain awareness that is good for my music ; a " full
circle " millenium dimension of the sixties and seventies .
But I am still in the streets , and no one offers any gigs ...
A frozen situation that is explained under .
A double sided media on all topics ; music reduced mainly to very
commercial products , with always the same artists at national level .
A twofold system where U.S. and British imports get airplay and
viewing , but local material is profiled in a narrow " who fits the
entertainment picture " . An interesting idea from a U.S. partner is
to try on his side to open the door with a major distribution network
over there , and then " fold back " through this approach on Europe
to give me the ticket . I like that idea very much , as I am getting
nowhere fast .
Now for the U.S. members and other , please read under a review of the
situation in France :
The recent riots in France make Worldwide news .
It shows the incapability of the political class on all sides for
the last 30 years to deal with racial equality and adjustments .
Quote from the International press .
A hidden segregation going back to the generation born after the
independence wars of Algeria , Tunisia , Morocco , etc ... ) , after
their parents moved th France .
This has a this stage little to do with the other terrorists ; it is
more of a local issue , but could become dangerous if linked with the
above mentioned , especially after the expulsion of the country of
120 offenders . The various medias of different countries give all
different figures and interpretations of these events , that have
caused very serious material damage on the European scale .
( 10 of thousands cars burned , curfew laws , many factories , schools
buildings , etc ... burned down . ) .
A very complex state of affairs , that will not improve in a hurry .
More than likely get worse before it gets better . This is not
pessimistic , just realistic . And half know , the other half ignore
it , hence the divide of society .
Added to students miscontent , Unions everywhere in protest , it is
a reflexion of what is going on over here . The cost of living is
much higher since the introduction of the Euro .
Also , the man responsible for all
this mess , according to the young generatio, is a Minister called
N.Sarkosy . Amongst other things , he was the Lord Mayor of the
residential area where my mother died , the unexplained " cover
up " of a death by shotgun , core of my book .
Coincidence ?
I do not have to post more at this stage , general strikes in Belgium
and France after last month again to come ...
After the " no " vote " from Holland and France to the European
Constitution , a rather strong signal of things to come . Upcoming
events will be followed by the International media .
The U.S. has at least one Constitution , one language as a whole ,
one dollar , one federal reserve , and a relative freedom of
enterprise . Publish America would be a difficult business venture
over here . In France , there were appx. 100 publishers 10 years ago :
only appx. 10 main ones subside , and to get a book to sell , it
needs a review called a " bonne feuille " in the serious press .
But the press is very often profiled in favour of ... etc ...
I am as an artist apolitical , I only reflect through my books and
the glass eye of love relationships the general surroundings
implementing the changes on the run .
Also positive new contracts in the U.S. . More on that later .
The recent riots in France make Worldwide news .
It shows the incapability of the political class on all sides for
the last 30 years to deal with racial equality and adjustments .
Quote from the International press .
A hidden segregation going back to the generation born after the
independence wars of Algeria , Tunisia , Morocco , etc ... ) , after
their parents moved th France .
This has a this stage little to do with the other terrorists ; it is
more of a local issue , but could become dangerous if linked with the
above mentioned , especially after the expulsion of the country of
120 offenders . The various medias of different countries give all
different figures and interpretations of these events , that have
caused very serious material damage on the European scale .
( 10 of thousands cars burned , curfew laws , many factories , schools
buildings , etc ... burned down . ) .
A very complex state of affairs , that will not improve in a hurry .
More than likely get worse before it gets better . This is not
pessimistic , just realistic . And half know , the other half ignore
it , hence the divide of society .
Added to students miscontent , Unions everywhere in protest , it is
a reflexion of what is going on over here . The cost of living is
much higher since the introduction of the Euro .
Also , the man responsible for all
this mess , according to the young generatio, is a Minister called
N.Sarkosy . Amongst other things , he was the Lord Mayor of the
residential area where my mother died , the unexplained " cover
up " of a death by shotgun , core of my book .
Coincidence ?
I do not have to post more at this stage , general strikes in Belgium
and France after last month again to come ...
After the " no " vote " from Holland and France to the European
Constitution , a rather strong signal of things to come . Upcoming
events will be followed by the International media .
The U.S. has at least one Constitution , one language as a whole ,
one dollar , one federal reserve , and a relative freedom of
enterprise . Publish America would be a difficult business venture
over here . In France , there were appx. 100 publishers 10 years ago :
only appx. 10 main ones subside , and to get a book to sell , it
needs a review called a " bonne feuille " in the serious press .
But the press is very often profiled in favour of ... etc ...
I am as an artist apolitical , I only reflect through my books and
the glass eye of love relationships the general surroundings
implementing the changes on the run .
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