Hi,
I've just finished an action comedy screenplay after two years of
blood, sweat and toil. I have got 2 professional opinions but they
differ much on several key matters. And one of the readers made some
damning comments without articulating on them, which leaves me even
more dazed and confused. So, I could use a volunteer or two to read it
and give me feedback.
Hopefully, it will be a fun task, as it is a comedy and I've
gotten good feedback on the humor.

Thank You,

Andrew