Hey, Birdy!

I was reading your posts. If you could try in the future to divide up
your sentences, it would make you easier to understand. You have
extremely run-on sentences that should be divided up. Otherwise it
reads as though you're speaking without taking a breath.

Example:
"Don't give up your going to make it I was
in a terrible accident but I survived it I didn't think I would oh my
name's Birdy what's your name?"

Should be:
"Don't give up, you're going to make it! I was
in a terrible accident, but I survived it. I didn't think I would...
Oh! my name's Birdy. What's your name?"

Think you could give that a try? :)

Sparf