StoryNotesNewsletter readers:

The "visual aid" regarding the
concept of Progressive Obstacles
didn't turn out well in the e-mail
version of the "Obstacles" article
-- and it's even worse in the
article as located at the on-site
"Most Recent Messages" section.

Luckily, a remedy is at hand.

If you would like to view the
illustration properly, go to ...

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/StoryNotesNewsletter/messages/20?
expand=1

(Note: if the entire url isn't clickable, then copy and
paste starting at the end, so that the entire url, including
"20?expand=1" is intact.)

Scroll down to Message 29, Issue #24 ("Obstacles"). The
illustration is about 2/3 of the way through the article.

And by the way ...

Some time back, Yahoo changed their layout, with the result
that the earlier articles in the Separate Messages (Most
Recent Messages) part of the site are now formatted poorly
(lines with just a word or two on them alternating with full
lines, skipped lines, etc. -- very annoying!).

Once again, a remedy is available!

To view all of the articles in their original formats, go to
...

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/StoryNotesNewsletter/messages/3?expand=1

... for the first set of articles, and ...

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/StoryNotesNewsletter/messages/20?
expand=1

... for the continuation.

Jeff Newman