Well lets just start with the good things. Kira's a heroine! Great job
on that. I don't know how you came up with 'Kindala' but I think it
has a nice ring to it. I liked the idea that there were other islands
because in the film it was though they were impling that the lands we
saw were the only ones and was the whole planet. However Kira's stunts
and leadership at the end was hard to believe. I could see her doing
subtle stunts but nothing violent. I think the story got out of hand.
You changed it from new peaceful world full of earth sprirts into
another where earth spirits have turned in fiery ones, a war all over
again. Now I've read one of Neil's fan fics and I admit it was a bit
suffocating with the amount of romance and no action or adventure. But
The Crystal Of Truth was too Hollywood. I felt sorry for Jen being
left as a background character. I'm looking for fanfics that feature
the Skeksis and the gelflings. I stumbled by too roleplay games one of
which I joined which featured these characters and if you ask me those
should become fanfics. They were amazing!! Fit for Fan fiction!!




--- In CrystalCorner@yahoogroups.com, "John A. Ardelli"
<gelfling@s...> wrote:
>
> On Nov 30, 2005, at 2:42 PM, princess_ayeka12 wrote:
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> > I've already read The Crystal of Truth . . .
>
> So, what did you think, then? :)
>